Talk:Pork

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The article gives the impression of being written to excite disgust or revulsion. Words like 'carcass', etc. Is someone trying to send a subtle message here? --Ed Poor 12:26, 24 May 2007 (EDT)

I've been accused of many things but subtle I ain't! ; P I can remove them or rephrase them if you prefer but it's pretty standard terminology when talking about cuts of meat. Fingermouse 12:31, 24 May 2007 (EDT)

Can you reword it so the reader would like to eat pork? --Ed Poor 12:32, 24 May 2007 (EDT)

Actually, I overused the word carcass, thanks for pointing it out as it seemed a bit repetitive. Used some friendlier similes, let me know if any more of it needs rewording. Fingermouse 12:33, 24 May 2007 (EDT)

You're doing fine; keep it up! :-) --Ed Poor 12:35, 24 May 2007 (EDT)