Talk:Essay:Women's Rights in Iran

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This page needs to be retitled

"Islam" is a proper noun, and takes an upper-case "I." JohnMcL 15:24, 6 August 2011 (EDT)

Rename or rewrite

This should either be rewritten to be more encyclopedic in nature or changed to an essay. --SharonW 15:25, 6 August 2011 (EDT)

I say this should be an essay.--JamesWilson 15:29, 6 August 2011 (EDT)

Further improvements

I've renamed this as an essay, but I still two things which could use improvement. First, "Muslim" is also a proper noun, and should be capitalized. Second, you lose some some credibility in my opinion when you say "hell" as an interjection. You might want to revise it a little bit to sound more professional. That's up to you, though, since this is an essay. --David B (TALK) 12:46, 20 June 2016 (EDT)