Writing Homework One Student Three - Revision history

CPalmer: cat

2012-04-13T09:25:34Z

cat

Aschlafly: very good

2012-02-08T01:26:22Z

very good

AranM at 13:26, February 2, 2012

2012-02-02T13:26:55Z

AranM: Created page with "1. It’s his bad attitude that’s the biggest problem; regardless, you cannot judge a book by its cover. 2. The day that Davey and I went to the football game, we didn’t se..."

2012-02-02T13:26:36Z

Created page with "1. It’s his bad attitude that’s the biggest problem; regardless, you cannot judge a book by its cover. 2. The day that Davey and I went to the football game, we didn’t se..."

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1. It’s his bad attitude that’s the biggest problem; regardless, you cannot judge a book by its cover.

2. The day that Davey and I went to the football game, we didn’t see anything there. Instead, the cop yelled at us, “Get lost before you are arrested by me!” Davey was really scared, but the cop didn’t arrest us.

3. Newt Gingrich declared, "[T]he media [are] terrified that the audience is going to side with the candidates against the media, which is what they've done in every debate." What mistake(s) did Newt, who has written many books, make in his statement? Explain.

Media is plural, and he should have not have used a pronoun when he referred to the audience the second time and could have restructured it as follows: “…which has happened in every debate.” This would avoid the dangling participle.

4. A good student is someone that can write very well, and quickly.

5. When I ran inside to avoid the rainstorm, my new sweater remained mostly dry.

6. The three things that needed to be completed on Wednesday morning were: calling my friend, finishing this homework, and jogging one mile.

Handed Essay in at class.

AranM

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 . It’s his bad attitude that’s the biggest problem; regardless, you cannot judge a book by its cover.
 . The day that Davey and I went to the football game, we didn’t see anything there.  Instead, the cop yelled at us, “Get lost before you are arrested by me!” Davey was really scared, but the cop didn’t arrest us.
 . Newt Gingrich declared, "[T]he media [are] terrified that the audience is going to side with the candidates against the media, which is what they've done in every debate." What mistake(s) did Newt, who has written many books, make in his statement? Explain.
 Media is plural, and he should have not have used a pronoun when he referred to the audience the second time and could have restructured it as follows: “…which has happened in every debate.” This would avoid the dangling participle.
 . A good student is someone that can write very well, and quickly.
 . When I ran inside to avoid the rainstorm, my new sweater remained mostly dry.
 . The three things that needed to be completed on Wednesday morning were:  calling my friend, finishing this homework, and jogging one mile.
 Handed Essay in at class.
 AranM