Writing Homework Three Student Three - Revision history

CPalmer: cat

2012-04-13T09:27:16Z

cat

Aschlafly: well done

2012-02-26T19:40:13Z

well done

AranM: Created page with "1. The best vegetable is asparagus. Most of the kids in public school eat candy, rather than good food; eating better will make you healthier than them. 2. Congress’s problem..."

2012-02-16T17:45:18Z

Created page with "1. The best vegetable is asparagus. Most of the kids in public school eat candy, rather than good food; eating better will make you healthier than them. 2. Congress’s problem..."

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1. The best vegetable is asparagus. Most of the kids in public school eat candy, rather than good food; eating better will make you healthier than them.

2. Congress’s problem: it is too weak. Those in Washington D.C. worry too much about what the public thinks, consequently doing us all a disservice.

3. Easter is a unique day of the year. Let’s face it; neither July 4th nor New Year’s Day are as special.

4. Someone needs to clean up this mess before the owner gets here. His note read, "Get [your] garbage out of [here] now”.

5. I am determined to catch all of the errors this time; I am not going to make any more mistakes. Do you think I enjoy being ridiculed like this?

6. These two things I know are true: good writing is priceless and poor writing will hurt my career. That is why I want to be a better writer.

AranM

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 . The best vegetable is asparagus. Most of the kids in public school eat candy, rather than good food; eating better will make you healthier than them.
 . Congress’s problem:  it is too weak. Those in Washington D.C. worry too much about what the public thinks, consequently doing us all a disservice.
 . Easter is a unique day of the year. Let’s face it; neither July 4th nor New Year’s Day are as special.
 . Someone needs to clean up this mess before the owner gets here.  His note read, "Get [your] garbage out of [here] now”.
 . I am determined to catch all of the errors this time; I am not going to make any more mistakes.  Do you think I enjoy being ridiculed like this?
 . These two things I know are true: good writing is priceless and poor writing will hurt my career. That is why I want to be a better writer.
 AranM