Gospel of Mark (Translated)

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The Gospel according to Mark is the second Gospel in the New Testament, but most likely the first to be written and the only one that introduces itself as a "gospel".

Mark (or John Mark), its author, was most likely the young son (perhaps ten years old) of a woman who was a follower and supporter of Jesus. Mark was a close aide to and possibly a scribe for Peter, who referred to him as his "son".[1]

The Gospel of Mark focuses more on human frailties and weaknesses than the other Gospels, and devotes less attention to the parables. Mark apparently describes his own shame as he witnessed and fled from Jesus's arrest: "A certain young man was following him, wearing nothing but a linen cloth. They caught hold of him, but he left the linen cloth and ran off naked."[2]

The theme of this Gospel is that suffering and loss are not always bad; for Christians they are the way to eternal life.

There are about 678 verses in the Gospel of Mark; translating merely six verses a day would result in a complete translation of this Gospel in less than four months.[3]

Chapter 1

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 The beginning of the gospel of Jesus Christ, the Son of God; This begins the gospel of Jesus Christ, the Son of God; implicit subject-verb included, with greater conciseness
2 As it is written in the prophets, Behold, I send my messenger before thy face, which shall prepare thy way before thee.nta As the prophets wrote, Listen, "I send my messenger before you, who shall shall clear your way." should Isaiah be mentioned specifically?
3 The voice of one crying in the wilderness, Prepare ye the way of the Lord, make his paths straight. The messenger preaches among skeptics, "Prepare for the way of the Lord and make straight His path."
4 John did baptize in the wilderness, and preach the baptism of repentance for the remission of sins. John did baptize in the desert, preaching repentance and the forgiveness of sins. conciseness and clarity: desert, not wilderness
5 And there went out unto him all the land of Judaea, and they of Jerusalem, and were all baptized of him in the river of Jordan, confessing their sins. And countless people from the Judaea and Jerusalem went to him, confessing their sins and receiving baptism in the Jordan River.
6 And John was clothed with camel's hair, and with a girdle of a skin about his loins; and he did eat locusts and wild honey; John survived on bare necessities, wearing a camel's hair habit with a leather belt; his food consisted of locusts and wild honey;
7 And preached, saying, There cometh one mightier than I after me, the latchet of whose shoes I am not worthy to stoop down and unloose. And preached, declaring "There will be someone so much greater that I am not even fit to stoop and untie his sandal straps."
8 I indeed have baptized you with water: but he shall baptize you with the Holy Ghost. "I have baptized you with water, but He shall baptize you with the Divine Guide." tentatively using "Divine Guide" per talk page. "With the power of the" seems somewhat awkward.
9 And it came to pass in those days, that Jesus came from Nazareth of Galilee, and was baptized of John in Jordan. Jesus then appeared from Nazareth of Galilee, and was baptized by John in the Jordan River.
10 And straightway coming up out of the water, he saw the heavens opened, and the Spirit like a dove descending upon him: And as Jesus emerged from the water, the heavens opened and the Divine Guide descended like a dove upon Him: See 8.
11 And there came a voice from heaven, saying, Thou art my beloved Son, in whom I am well pleased. A voice came from heaven declaring, "You are my beloved Son whom I love dearly."
12 And immediately the Spirit driveth him into the wilderness. The Divine Guide then led Jesus into the desert. it was more a desert than a wilderness. See 8 re. Guide.
13 And he was there in the wilderness forty days, tempted of Satan; and was with the wild beasts; and the angels ministered unto him. He remained in the desert for forty days, where Satan tempted Him; and was with wild animals as the angels protected Him.
14 Now after that John was put in prison, Jesus came into Galilee, preaching the gospel of the kingdom of God, Next, after John was imprisoned, Jesus arrived in Galilee and preached the gospel of the kingdom of God,
15 And saying, The time is fulfilled, and the kingdom of God is at hand: repent ye, and believe the gospel. Saying "The time is fulfilled and the kingdom of God is at hand. Repent and believe the good news." Gospel (good news) has come to refer to these works themselves, which could prove confusing.
16 Now as he walked by the sea of Galilee, he saw Simon and Andrew his brother casting a net into the sea: for they were fishers. As He walked by the Sea of Galilee, He Saw Simon and his brother Andrew casting a net into the sea, for they were fishermen,
17 And Jesus said unto them, Come ye after me, and I will make you to become fishers of men. And Jesus said to them, "Follow me, and I will make you fishers of men."
18 And straightway they forsook their nets, and followed him. Setting aside their nets at once, they followed him. straightway and forsook are largely unused. Did forsake mean to simply "set aside" or more forcefully "abandon"?
19 And when he had gone a little further thence, he saw James the son of Zebedee, and John his brother, who also were in the ship mending their nets. When He had traveled a little further, He saw James, the son of Zebedee, and John, his brother, who were also in a ship, mending their nets. Is there a reason this uses "the ship" as opposed to "a ship"?
20 And straightway he called them: and they left their father Zebedee in the ship with the hired servants, and went after him. He called to them, and they left their father Zebedee and his workers aboard the ship, and went after Jesus. "hired servant" antiquated. Aboard a ship, it could be workers, employees, or simply crew.
21 And they went into Capernaum; and straightway on the sabbath day he entered into the synagogue, and taught. They went into Capernaum and He entered the synagogue on the sabbath to teach.
22 And they were astonished at his doctrine: for he taught them as one that had authority, and not as the scribes. There, the listeners were astonished by his doctrine, for He taught as a man of great authority, not as a scribe. "They" is a needlessly vague term for the audience
23 And there was in their synagogue a man with an unclean spirit; and he cried out, A possessed man was in the synagogue shouting,
24 Saying, Let us alone; what have we to do with thee, thou Jesus of Nazareth? art thou come to destroy us? I know thee who thou art, the Holy One of God. "Let us alone, Jesus of Nazareth, for we're none of your business. Have you come to destroy us? I know who you are, the Holy One of God."
25 And Jesus rebuked him, saying, Hold thy peace, and come out of him. Jesus then rebuked the evil spirit, "Shut up and depart from him." Isn't the evil spirit better translated as "Satan"? Perhaps that's not fully justified.
26 And when the unclean spirit had torn him, and cried with a loud voice, he came out of him. The evil spirit then ripped away from the possessed man, cried out in a loud voice, and came out of him.
27 And they were all amazed, insomuch that they questioned among themselves, saying, What thing is this? what new doctrine is this? for with authority commandeth he even the unclean spirits, and they do obey him. The bystanders were all amazed, and asked each other, "What explains this? Is this a new doctrine? He acted with authority in ordering the evil spirits, and they obeyed him!"
28 And immediately his fame spread abroad throughout all the region round about Galilee. Jesus's fame spread immediately throughout Galilee.
29 And forthwith, when they were come out of the synagogue, they entered into the house of Simon and Andrew, with James and John. As soon as Jesus's group left the synagogue, they entered along with James and John the home of Simon and Andrew.
30 But Simon's wife's mother lay sick of a fever, and anon they tell him of her. But Simon's mother-in-law was in bed sick with a fever, and Jesus was told.
31 And he came and took her by the hand, and lifted her up; and immediately the fever left her, and she ministered unto them. So he came and, taking her by her hand, helped her stand up; whereupon the fever immediately passed, and she served the others.
32 And at even, when the sun did set, they brought unto him all that were diseased, and them that were possessed with devils. At sundown the people brought to Jesus many sick people, and many possessed by the devil,
33 And all the city was gathered together at the door. And all the city's people gathered at his door.
34 And he healed many that were sick of divers diseases, and cast out many devils; and suffered not the devils to speak, because they knew him. Jesus healed many who were diseased, and he cast out many devils; he commanded the devils to be silent, because they knew Jesus as God.
35 And in the morning, rising up a great while before day, he went out, and departed into a solitary place, and there prayed. In the early morning, before dawn, he left to pray in a solitary place.
36 And Simon and they that were with him followed after him. Simon and the others followed him,
37 And when they had found him, they said unto him, All men seek for thee. And finding him, told him "All men wish to find you." Seems a bit awkward
38 And he said unto them, Let us go into the next towns, that I may preach there also: for therefore came I forth. Jesus replied, "Let us travel to the next towns, so I may preach in them too, for that is the reason I came."
39 And he preached in their synagogues throughout all Galilee, and cast out devils. And he preached in the synagogues and cast out devils throughout Galilee.
40 And there came a leper to him, beseeching him, and kneeling down to him, and saying unto him, If thou wilt, thou canst make me clean. A leper came to him, kneeling and imploring him, saying, "If you wish it, you can cure my illness." "Make clean" replaced with the modern concept "cure." Does this change/mask the meaning?
41 And Jesus, moved with compassion, put forth his hand, and touched him, and saith unto him, I will; be thou clean. Jesus was moved by compassion, and putting out his hand to touch him, replied, "I will. Be cured." See 40.
42 And as soon as he had spoken, immediately the leprosy departed from him, and he was cleansed. Immediately after Jesus had spoken, the leprosy departed the man, and he was cured. See 40.
43 And he straitly charged him, and forthwith sent him away; Jesus ordered him to leave at once;
44 And saith unto him, See thou say nothing to any man: but go thy way, shew thyself to the priest, and offer for thy cleansing those things which Moses commanded, for a testimony unto them. And said to him, "Tell no one, but be on your way and show yourself to the priest, offering in thanks for your healing what Moses commanded and this will serve as testimony to others."
45 But he went out, and began to publish it much, and to blaze abroad the matter, insomuch that Jesus could no more openly enter into the city, but was without in desert places: and they came to him from every quarter. But the cured man immediately announced to all what had happened, and the publicity made it impossible for Jesus to move about; he withdrew to the desert, but the people still came to him from everywhere.

Chapter 2

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And again he entered into Capernaum, after some days; and it was noised that he was in the house. He returned to Capernaum and, after several days there, news spread of where he was staying. Extremely archaic phrase (Noised, in the house) replaced with equivalent
2 And straightway many were gathered together, insomuch that there was no room to receive them, no, not so much as about the door: and he preached the word unto them. A large crowd immediately filled the room to capacity, so many that the door was too jammed for access by others, as he preached the truth.
3 And they come unto him, bringing one sick of the palsy, which was borne of four. They brought him a man suffering from palsy, carried by four men.
4 And when they could not come nigh unto him for the press, they uncovered the roof where he was: and when they had broken it up, they let down the bed wherein the sick of the palsy lay. Finding they could not reach him, because the crowd was so thick, they removed the roof above him and, when they had done so, lowered the palsied man in his bed.
5 When Jesus saw their faith, he said unto the sick of the palsy, Son, thy sins be forgiven thee. Seeing their faith in him, he told the palsied man, "Son, your sins are forgiven."
6 But there were certain of the scribes sitting there, and reasoning in their hearts, Yet among the assembled scribes were those who thought to themselves,
7 Why doth this man thus speak blasphemies? who can forgive sins but God only? "Why is this man speaking such blasphemy? Who can forgive our sins but God himself?"
8 And immediately when Jesus perceived in his spirit that they so reasoned within themselves, he said unto them, Why reason ye these things in your hearts? Jesus perceived immediately what the intellectual types were thinking, and he asked them, "Why are you so hostile to this? the hostility was to the forgiveness
9 Whether is it easier to say to the sick of the palsy, Thy sins be forgiven thee; or to say, Arise, and take up thy bed, and walk? Is it easier to tell a paralyzed man that his sins are forgiven, or to pick up his bed and walk?
10 But that ye may know that the Son of man hath power on earth to forgive sins, (he saith to the sick of the palsy,) But to remove any doubt about the Son of man's power on earth to forgive sins," he next said to the paralyzed man,
11 I say unto thee, Arise, and take up thy bed, and go thy way into thine house. "Get up, carry your bed, and go home!"
12 And immediately he arose, took up the bed, and went forth before them all; insomuch that they were all amazed, and glorified God, saying, We never saw it on this fashion. He got up, carried his bed, and left. Amazed, they all praised God, "We've never seen such a thing before." Very archaic phrasing
13 And he went forth again by the sea side; and all the multitude resorted unto him, and he taught them. Jesus continued along the seaside, and taught the crowds that gathered around him.
14 And as he passed by, he saw Levi the son of Alphaeus sitting at the receipt of custom, and said unto him, Follow me. And he arose and followed him. He passed Levi, son of Alphaeus, at a tax office and told him, "Follow me." Levi arose and followed.
15 And it came to pass, that, as Jesus sat at meat in his house, many publicans and sinners sat also together with Jesus and his disciples: for there were many, and they followed him. Jesus then dined with a great many tax collectors and sinners who chose to follow him. Modern form of publican?
16 And when the scribes and Pharisees saw him eat with publicans and sinners, they said unto his disciples, How is it that he eateth and drinketh with publicans and sinners? Seeing him eating with the tax collectors and sinners, the Pharisees and intellectuals demanded of his disciples, "Why does he eat and drink with these tax collectors and sinners?"
17 When Jesus heard it, he saith unto them, They that are whole have no need of the physician, but they that are sick: I came not to call the righteous, but sinners to repentance. Hearing this, Jesus replied, "It is not the healthy but the sick that need a doctor. I have not come to call the righteous to repent, but instead the sinners."
18 And the disciples of John and of the Pharisees used to fast: and they come and say unto him, Why do the disciples of John and of the Pharisees fast, but thy disciples fast not? As the Pharisees and John's disciples fasted, they came and asked of him, "Why do they fast, but your disciples do not?"
19 And Jesus said unto them, Can the children of the bridechamber fast, while the bridegroom is with them? as long as they have the bridegroom with them, they cannot fast. To this Jesus replied, "Why should the children in the bridechamber fast so long as the bridegroom is among them? While he remains, they have no cause to fast." "Cannot" implies impossibility, rather than lack of necessity. They have no cause to fast so long as the Son is with them.
20 But the days will come, when the bridegroom shall be taken away from them, and then shall they fast in those days. "Soon it will be that the bridegroom will be taken from them, and only then will they fast."
21 No man also seweth a piece of new cloth on an old garment: else the new piece that filled it up taketh away from the old, and the rent is made worse. "No man patches old clothing with a new piece of cloth, as it will pull apart as it ages, making the tear worse."
22 And no man putteth new wine into old bottles: else the new wine doth burst the bottles, and the wine is spilled, and the bottles will be marred: but new wine must be put into new bottles. "No man puts new wine in old bottles, as new wine bursts the bottles, spilling the wine and damaging the bottles. New wine must be put into new bottles."
23 And it came to pass, that he went through the corn fields on the sabbath day; and his disciples began, as they went, to pluck the ears of corn. On the sabbath his disciples plucked ears of corn as he traveled among the corn fields,
24 And the Pharisees said unto him, Behold, why do they on the sabbath day that which is not lawful? and the Pharisees cried, "Look, why do the break the law on the Sabbath?"
25 And he said unto them, Have ye never read what David did, when he had need, and was an hungred, he, and they that were with him? To this Jesus replied, "Haven't you read what David and his allies did, when he was hungry and in need?"
26 How he went into the house of God in the days of Abiathar the high priest, and did eat the shewbread, which is not lawful to eat but for the priests, and gave also to them which were with him? "How he went into God's temple, in the times of the high priest Abiathar, and ate the blessed bread - the bread which only priests are allowed to eat - and fed his allies with it?"
27 And he said unto them, The sabbath was made for man, and not man for the sabbath: Jesus told them, "The Sabbath was made for man, not man for the Sabbath, clarifies role of Sabbath, against slavish observation to the point of hurting man
28 Therefore the Son of man is Lord also of the sabbath. and thus the Son of man is also Lord of the Sabbath."

Chapter 3

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And he entered again into the synagogue; and there was a man there which had a withered hand. Jesus returned to the synagogue, and noticed man with a crippled hand.
2 And they watched him, whether he would heal him on the sabbath day; that they might accuse him. The intellectuals watched Jesus to see if he might catch and accuse him of healing on the Sabbath. Tentatively using "intellectuals" rather than "Pharisees" or skeptical "teachers"
3 And he saith unto the man which had the withered hand, Stand forth. Jesus told the man with the crippled hand, "Stand up in front of everyone."
4 And he saith unto them, Is it lawful to do good on the sabbath days, or to do evil? to save life, or to kill? But they held their peace. Jesus asked the intellectuals, "Which is lawful on the Sabbath: doing good or evil? Saving a life, or killing one? The intellectuals did not answer."
5 And when he had looked round about on them with anger, being grieved for the hardness of their hearts, he saith unto the man, Stretch forth thine hand. And he stretched it out: and his hand was restored whole as the other. Jesus looked at them, feeling anger and pity for the hardness of their hearts, and said to the injured man, "Open your hand." He then opened and held out his hand, and it was as good as new.
6 And the Pharisees went forth, and straightway took counsel with the Herodians against him, how they might destroy him. The intellectuals then fled from the scene to plot with Herod's people against Jesus, and plan how they might destroy him.
7 But Jesus withdrew himself with his disciples to the sea: and a great multitude from Galilee followed him, and from Judaea, Jesus then departed for the quiet of a lake, but crowds from Galilee and Judaea followed him, "lake" better than a "sea"
8 And from Jerusalem, and from Idumaea, and from beyond Jordan; and they about Tyre and Sidon, a great multitude, when they had heard what great things he did, came unto him. And crowds went to Jesus from Jerusalem, Idumea, Tyre and Sidon, and from beyond the Jordan River, after hearing of his great deeds for the sick. modernize spelling: Idumaea -> Idumea
9 And he spake to his disciples, that a small ship should wait on him because of the multitude, lest they should throng him. Jesus asked his disciples for a small boat that would enable him to keep a distance from pressing crowds
10 For he had healed many; insomuch that they pressed upon him for to touch him, as many as had plagues. Jesus had healed many, causing the the diseased to nearly trample him as they sought his touch as a cure. a bit awkward, could be improved
11 And unclean spirits, when they saw him, fell down before him, and cried, saying, Thou art the Son of God. Upon seeing Jesus, evil spirits fell down before him crying, "You are the Son of God!" need to add something to convey that these spirits possessed people
12 And he straitly charged them that they should not make him known. But Jesus strictly commanded them not to tell others who he was.
13 And he goeth up into a mountain, and calleth unto him whom he would: and they came unto him. He then walked up a mountain, calling his Apostles to follow him, and they did.
14 And he ordained twelve, that they should be with him, and that he might send them forth to preach, He appointed twelve to be with him, so he could send them to preach to the world,
15 And to have power to heal sicknesses, and to cast out devils: and to have power to heal the sick and cast out demons from the possessed:
16 And Simon he surnamed Peter; Jesus gave the name of Peter to Simon
17 And James the son of Zebedee, and John the brother of James; and he surnamed them Boanerges, which is, The sons of thunder: James and his brother John, the sons of Zebedee, Jesus named them "Boanerges," which means "The Sons of Thunder":
18 And Andrew, and Philip, and Bartholomew, and Matthew, and Thomas, and James the son of Alphaeus, and Thaddaeus, and Simon the Canaanite, And also appointed were Andrew, Philip, Bartholomew, Matthew, Thomas, James the son of Alphaeus, Thaddaeus, and Simon the Canaanite,
19 And Judas Iscariot, which also betrayed him: and they went into an house. And Judas Iscariot, who was to betray Jesus: and they all entered a house note how the KJV uses "which" for persons, rather than the more respectful "who"; the KJV also uses "an" rather than "a" before a word that begins with "h"
20 And the multitude cometh together again, so that they could not so much as eat bread. But the crowd pressed upon them so much that they could not even eat.
21 And when his friends heard of it, they went out to lay hold on him: for they said, He is beside himself. When Jesus's own family heard of this, they went to rescue him, saying, "He is out of his mind." note how even Jesus's own family felt less of him
22 And the scribes which came down from Jerusalem said, He hath Beelzebub, and by the prince of the devils casteth he out devils. Jerusalem intellectuals came also, smearing Jesus by saying "He has Beelzebub and casts out devils by the power of the devil!" translate Beelzebub better?
23 And he called them unto him, and said unto them in parables, How can Satan cast out Satan? But Jesus called them together and taught in parables, and asked "How can Satan cast out Satan?"
24 And if a kingdom be divided against itself, that kingdom cannot stand. "A kingdom divided against itself cannot stand."
25 And if a house be divided against itself, that house cannot stand. "Nor can a house divided against itself stand."
26 And if Satan rise up against himself, and be divided, he cannot stand, but hath an end. "So if Satan were divided against himself, he could not stand, and would perish."
27 No man can enter into a strong man's house, and spoil his goods, except he will first bind the strong man; and then he will spoil his house. "No one can break into a well-armed man's house to destroy his property, unless he first tie the man down. Only then can he damage his home." "Strong" replaced with modern equivalent of defended
28 Verily I say unto you, All sins shall be forgiven unto the sons of men, and blasphemies wherewith soever they shall blaspheme: I tell you, "All the sons of men will be forgiven their sins and their blasphemies,"
29 But he that shall blaspheme against the Holy Ghost hath never forgiveness, but is in danger of eternal damnation: "But any man who blasphemes against the Divine Guide will never be forgiven, but risks eternal damnation."
30 Because they said, He hath an unclean spirit. This Jesus told them because they lied, "He has an evil spirit."
31 There came then his brethren and his mother, and, standing without, sent unto him, calling him. His mother and his brothers, who were standing outside, asked to see him.
32 And the multitude sat about him, and they said unto him, Behold, thy mother and thy brethren without seek for thee. The crowd around Jesus said to him, "Your mother and brothers are outside, looking for you."
33 And he answered them, saying, Who is my mother, or my brethren? To which he responded, "Who is my mother, or my brothers?"
34 And he looked round about on them which sat about him, and said, Behold my mother and my brethren! Then, looking around at the gathered crowed, he said, "You are my mother and brothers!"
35 For whosoever shall do the will of God, the same is my brother, and my sister, and mother. Whoever does the will of God qualifies as my brother, sister or mother.

Chapter 4

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And he began again to teach by the sea side: and there was gathered unto him a great multitude, so that he entered into a ship, and sat in the sea; and the whole multitude was by the sea on the land. Jesus returned to teaching again on the seashore, but the crowd was so overwhelming that he turned a boat into a makeshift pulpit while the people pressed to the shoreline.
2 And he taught them many things by parables, and said unto them in his doctrine, He taught them many things, using parables, and told them,
3 Hearken; Behold, there went out a sower to sow: "Listen. A farmer went out to sow a crop."
4 And it came to pass, as he sowed, some fell by the way side, and the fowls of the air came and devoured it up. "As he sowed, some seed was scattered on the path, which was eaten by the bird."
5 And some fell on stony ground, where it had not much earth; and immediately it sprang up, because it had no depth of earth: "Some fell on stony ground, which lacked deep soil, and grew quickly."
6 But when the sun was up, it was scorched; and because it had no root, it withered away. "But once the sun was out, it was scorched and withered away, as its root was too shallow."
7 And some fell among thorns, and the thorns grew up, and choked it, and it yielded no fruit. "Some was scattered among weeds, which choked it, and it didn't produce fruit."
8 And other fell on good ground, and did yield fruit that sprang up and increased; and brought forth, some thirty, and some sixty, and some an hundred. "But some seed fell upon good soil and produced a great deal of fruit, thirty, sixty, even one-hundred times the original investment." Clear language of "increase"
9 And he said unto them, He that hath ears to hear, let him hear. Then Jesus said to them, "let any man who has ears hear."
10 And when he was alone, they that were about him with the twelve asked of him the parable. Privately a few along with the twelve Apostles asked Jesus about the parable.
11 And he said unto them, Unto you it is given to know the mystery of the kingdom of God: but unto them that are without, all these things are done in parables: He said to them, "You have been granted insight into the kingdom of God, but to others the parables contain the mysteries:
12 That seeing they may see, and not perceive; and hearing they may hear, and not understand; lest at any time they should be converted, and their sins should be forgiven them. that they may see but not perceive and hear but not understand; yet should they convert, then their sins shall be forgiven." translating this verse is a big challenge
13 And he said unto them, Know ye not this parable? and how then will ye know all parables? Then he asked them, "Don't you understand this parable? If not, how can you understand all of the other parables?"
14 The sower soweth the word. "The farmer plants the truth."
15 And these are they by the way side, where the word is sown; but when they have heard, Satan cometh immediately, and taketh away the word that was sown in their hearts. "As for the people who are on the path, where the seeds are scattered, Satan comes as soon they have heard the truth, and takes it from their hearts."
16 And these are they likewise which are sown on stony ground; who, when they have heard the word, immediately receive it with gladness; "Likewise with those planted on the stony ground. When they hear the truth, they receive it with joy,"
17 And have no root in themselves, and so endure but for a time: afterward, when affliction or persecution ariseth for the word's sake, immediately they are offended. "But they have little self-mastery, so they endure in the truth only briefly. Afterward, when they must face persecution or harm for the sake of the truth, they abandon it. "root in themselves" made clearer for modern english readers
18 And these are they which are sown among thorns; such as hear the word, "Then there are those planted among the thorns. They hear the word,"
19 And the cares of this world, and the deceitfulness of riches, and the lusts of other things entering in, choke the word, and it becometh unfruitful. "But because of worldly concerns, the deceit of wealth, and other desires, the truth is suffocated and cannot bear fruit."
20 And these are they which are sown on good ground; such as hear the word, and receive it, and bring forth fruit, some thirtyfold, some sixty, and some an hundred. "Finally are those planted in good ground. They hear the truth, accept it, and produce good fruit in their turn. Sometimes thirty, sixty, or even one hundred times more."
21 And he said unto them, Is a candle brought to be put under a bushel, or under a bed? and not to be set on a candlestick? Then he asked them, "Do we light candles only to hide them under a box or a bed, rather than to place them on candlesticks?" Bushel has come to mean a measure, rather than an object containing that measure
22 For there is nothing hid, which shall not be manifested; neither was any thing kept secret, but that it should come abroad. Nothing is hidden which will not be brought to light. Likewise any secret kept will soon become known."
23 If any man have ears to hear, let him hear. "If a man is open-minded, let him hear the truth."
24 And he said unto them, Take heed what ye hear: with what measure ye mete, it shall be measured to you: and unto you that hear shall more be given. Then he said to them, "Be careful of what you listen to. Whichever measure you apply, you shall be measured accordingly, and those of you who listen will be given more."
25 For he that hath, to him shall be given: and he that hath not, from him shall be taken even that which he hath. "He who has will be given, while he doesn't will see that little which he has taken from him."
26 And he said, So is the kingdom of God, as if a man should cast seed into the ground; "The kingdom of God is the same way. If someone sows seed on the ground,"
27 And should sleep, and rise night and day, and the seed should spring and grow up, he knoweth not how. "And goes to sleep and waits several days, plants will spring from the seeds, though he doesn't know how."
28 For the earth bringeth forth fruit of herself; first the blade, then the ear, after that the full corn in the ear. "Because it is the earth that brings forth the fruit: first a blade, then an ear of corn, then the corn itself."
29 But when the fruit is brought forth, immediately he putteth in the sickle, because the harvest is come. "And when the fruit has been produced, he brings out the sickle and harvests his produce."
30 And he said, Whereunto shall we liken the kingdom of God? or with what comparison shall we compare it? Then he said, "What will we say God's kingdom is like? What comparison can we use? Modernizing language and word order
31 It is like a grain of mustard seed, which, when it is sown in the earth, is less than all the seeds that be in the earth: It's like a single mustard seed, which is smaller than all other seeds on earth when placed in the ground,
32 But when it is sown, it groweth up, and becometh greater than all herbs, and shooteth out great branches; so that the fowls of the air may lodge under the shadow of it. But once planted, it grows larger than all the other herbs and grows large branches, so the birds can shelter under its shadow."
33 And with many such parables spake he the word unto them, as they were able to hear it. He used many parables like this one to preach God's word in a way that they could understand. Make clear that it's God's word, and that 'hear' means 'understand' in this context.
34 But without a parable spake he not unto them: and when they were alone, he expounded all things to his disciples. He would only speak to the multitude in the form of parables; but when He was alone with His disciples, he explained the parables' true meaning to them. Some exposition to make meaning clearer.
35 And the same day, when the even was come, he saith unto them, Let us pass over unto the other side. Later that day, around sunset, He said to His disciples: "Let's cross over to the opposite shore." Modernized word choices.
36 And when they had sent away the multitude, they took him even as he was in the ship. And there were also with him other little ships. They dismissed the crowd, and then cast off in the boat where Jesus had been preaching, with Jesus still on board. Some other boats also went with them. 'even as he was' needs some explanation for the modern reader.
37 And there arose a great storm of wind, and the waves beat into the ship, so that it was now full. Suddenly a fierce storm came, with strong winds. Waves started to break over the boat, so that it began to fill with water. Boat can't have been literally full as we would think of it, as Jesus was asleep on a pillow (see next verse).
38 And he was in the hinder part of the ship, asleep on a pillow: and they awake him, and say unto him, Master, carest thou not that we perish? Jesus was sleeping on a cushion in the back of the boat. They woke him saying, "Master, don't you care that we'll capsize and drown?" Could say "stern" rather than "back of the boat," but nautical terminology is unfamiliar to many.
39 And he arose, and rebuked the wind, and said unto the sea, Peace, be still. And the wind ceased, and there was a great calm. He got up and rebuked the wind, and commanded the sea, "Peace, be still." The wind then stopped, and there was complete calm.
40 And he said unto them, Why are ye so fearful? how is it that ye have no faith? He asked them, "Why are you so afraid? What is the reason for your lack of faith?"
41 And they feared exceedingly, and said one to another, What manner of man is this, that even the wind and the sea obey him? Filled with trepidation, they asked each other: "What kind of man is he, such that even the wind and sea obey him?

Chapter 5

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And they came over unto the other side of the sea, into the country of the Gadarenes. They reached the other side of the lake, which was in the area where the Gadarenes lived. 'area' clearer than 'country' to today's reader
2 And when he was come out of the ship, immediately there met him out of the tombs a man with an unclean spirit, As Jesus disembarked the boat, he was immediately confronted by a possessed man,
3 Who had his dwelling among the tombs; and no man could bind him, no, not with chains: who was homeless and slept in a cemetery; no man had the strength to restrain him, not even with chains: avoid feminist style of seeking gender neutrality by replacing "man" with "one"; the reference is obviously to men not being able to restrain him, not to women
4 Because that he had been often bound with fetters and chains, and the chains had been plucked asunder by him, and the fetters broken in pieces: neither could any man tame him. Many times, he had been restrained by ropes and chains, but he had thrown off the chains and broken the ropes to pieces. No man could tame him. "Fetters" has become identical to chains, thus redundant. Original concept was anything restrictive, ie rope.
5 And always, night and day, he was in the mountains, and in the tombs, crying, and cutting himself with stones. Day and night he roamed the mountains and tombs, crying out and cutting himself with stones.
6 But when he saw Jesus afar off, he ran and worshipped him, But when he glimpsed Jesus at a distance, he ran up to him to worship him.
7 And cried with a loud voice, and said, What have I to do with thee, Jesus, thou Son of the most high God? I adjure thee by God, that thou torment me not. He cried out loudly, "What am I to you, Jesus, Son of the omnipotent God? I beg you in God's name not to torment me." Archaic language (adjure)
8 For he said unto him, Come out of the man, thou unclean spirit. Because Jesus had proclaimed, "Leave that man, evil spirit." "evil" spirit seems preferable to "unclean" spirit; perhaps the "Devil" or "demon" would be better still
9 And he asked him, What is thy name? And he answered, saying, My name is Legion: for we are many. Jesus asked him, "What is your name?" He answered, "My name is 'Legion', because we are many."
10 And he besought him much that he would not send them away out of the country. He begged Jesus not to expel him from the area. "Area" better than the modern meaning of "country"; nationality was not an issue here.
11 Now there was there nigh unto the mountains a great herd of swine feeding. Near the mountains where they were, a large herd of pigs was feeding. Pigs more modern than archaic swine
12 And all the devils besought him, saying, Send us into the swine, that we may enter into them. The demons all begged Jesus, "Move us to the pigs, so that we may possess them."
13 And forthwith Jesus gave them leave. And the unclean spirits went out, and entered into the swine: and the herd ran violently down a steep place into the sea, (they were about two thousand;) and were choked in the sea. Jesus then granted the demons' wish to enter the pigs. The demons left the man and to possess the herd of nearly two thousand pigs, which then committed suicide by running violently down a steep embankment to drown in the sea. could be improved further
14 And they that fed the swine fled, and told it in the city, and in the country. And they went out to see what it was that was done. Those in charge of the pigs fled and told everyone in the town and countryside. People then went to see for themselves what had happened.
15 And they come to Jesus, and see him that was possessed with the devil, and had the legion, sitting, and clothed, and in his right mind: and they were afraid. They saw Jesus and the man formerly possessed, who was in his right mind and sitting peacefully, fully dressed; the people became afraid upon seeing him.
16 And they that saw it told them how it befell to him that was possessed with the devil, and also concerning the swine. Witnesses to the exorcism described for the people how the devil left the man and entered the pigs.
17 And they began to pray him to depart out of their coasts. The terrified people began to pray that Jesus leave their area.
18 And when he was come into the ship, he that had been possessed with the devil prayed him that he might be with him. The man who had been possessed came to Jesus' boat, and begged Jesus to let him join His disciples. Some explanation here to ensure clarity.
19 Howbeit Jesus suffered him not, but saith unto him, Go home to thy friends, and tell them how great things the Lord hath done for thee, and hath had compassion on thee. Instead, Jesus told him, "Return home to your friends, and tell them how the Lord has done wonders for you with compassion." avoid dilution of the name "Lord"
20 And he departed, and began to publish in Decapolis how great things Jesus had done for him: and all men did marvel. So the man left and told many in Decapolis about Jesus's great works for him, to the amazement of all men. "told many" is better than "publish"; also, avoid feminist change of "men" to "people"
21 And when Jesus was passed over again by ship unto the other side, much people gathered unto him: and he was nigh unto the sea. As a result a huge crowd was awaiting Jesus on the opposite coast as he crossed by boat, keeping him on the seashore. might be a better word for "keeping", such as "pinning"
22 And, behold, there cometh one of the rulers of the synagogue, Jairus by name; and when he saw him, he fell at his feet, Incredibly, Jairus, one of the leaders of the synagogue, joined the crowd. When he saw Jesus, he threw himself at His feet, Difficult to get the sense of 'Behold' - presume it means that everyone in the crowd turned to look. Another view: translate "behold" as "incredibly", because I think it is a word targeted at the reader rather than describing the crowd
23 And besought him greatly, saying, My little daughter lieth at the point of death: I pray thee, come and lay thy hands on her, that she may be healed; and she shall live. and begged Him urgently, saying "My little daughter is about to die - please come and put your hands on her, so that she will be healed; and then she will live." minor modernizations to the language.
24 And Jesus went with him; and much people followed him, and thronged him. Jesus accompanied him; many followed Jesus, hording around Him. "thronged him" = "hoarded around him"?
25 And a certain woman, which had an issue of blood twelve years, One woman who had suffered from hemorrhages for twelve years,
26 And had suffered many things of many physicians, and had spent all that she had, and was nothing bettered, but rather grew worse, and had suffered further from mistreatments by doctors, having spent all she had on them without any improvement; her condition even worsened. style could be improved here
27 When she had heard of Jesus, came in the press behind, and touched his garment. When she heard of Jesus she crowded behind Him and touched his clothes,
28 For she said, If I may touch but his clothes, I shall be whole. Because as she had said, "If I can just touch His clothes, I will be restored to good health." 'whole' meaning 'restored to health'
29 And straightway the fountain of her blood was dried up; and she felt in her body that she was healed of that plague. Instantly the blood dried up, and she felt cured of her illness.
30 And Jesus, immediately knowing in himself that virtue had gone out of him, turned him about in the press, and said, Who touched my clothes? Jesus immediately realized that power discharged from him, and turned to the pressing crowd to say, "Who touched my clothes?" "power discharged" - suggestions to improve?
31 And his disciples said unto him, Thou seest the multitude thronging thee, and sayest thou, Who touched me? Astonished by the question, His disciples replied, "You see the huge crowd pressing against you, and yet you ask, 'Who touched me'"? probably a better way to convey the point than by adding the phrase "astonished by the question"
32 And he looked round about to see her that had done this thing. Jesus turned and scanned the crowd to find her.
33 But the woman fearing and trembling, knowing what was done in her, came and fell down before him, and told him all the truth. But the terrified, trembling woman, aware of the miracle, came and bowed at Jesus's feet, and told him the entire truth.
34 And he said unto her, Daughter, thy faith hath made thee whole; go in peace, and be whole of thy plague. Jesus said to her: "Daughter, you have been healed because of your faith. Go with peace of mind, and live a life free from that terrible disease." Use a more current alternative to 'go in peace'? I put in "with peace of mind"; further improvements welcome.
35 While he yet spake, there came from the ruler of the synagogue's house certain which said, Thy daughter is dead: why troublest thou the Master any further? As Jesus spoke, people told the synagogue leader, "Your daughter has died. Why bother this teacher about this?"
36 As soon as Jesus heard the word that was spoken, he saith unto the ruler of the synagogue, Be not afraid, only believe. But as soon as Jesus heard about this, he said to the father, "Be not afraid, only believe."
37 And he suffered no man to follow him, save Peter, and James, and John the brother of James. Jesus then allowed only Peter, James, and John the brother of James to follow him
38 And he cometh to the house of the ruler of the synagogue, and seeth the tumult, and them that wept and wailed greatly. as he went to the synagogue leader's home, where Jesus saw the mourning, and all those who wept and cried enormously.
39 And when he was come in, he saith unto them, Why make ye this ado, and weep? the damsel is not dead, but sleepeth. When Jesus entered the house, he said to all the people, "What is the reason for all this crying and distress? The girl is not dead - she's just asleep!" Exclamation mark to emphasise the surprising nature of Jesus' statement.
40 And they laughed him to scorn. But when he had put them all out, he taketh the father and the mother of the damsel, and them that were with him, and entereth in where the damsel was lying. They laughed and ridiculed him. But after he drove them all out of the building, he took the girl's mother and father with him to where she was lying,
41 And he took the damsel by the hand, and said unto her, Talitha cumi; which is, being interpreted, Damsel, I say unto thee, arise. and taking her by the hand, said, "talitha cumi", which means "girl, I tell you to rise."
42 And straightway the damsel arose, and walked; for she was of the age of twelve years. And they were astonished with a great astonishment. Immediately the 12-year-old girl got up and walked. The onlookers were overwhelmed with wonder. amazed? dumbfounded?
43 And he charged them straitly that no man should know it; and commanded that something should be given her to eat. Jesus gave strict orders not to tell any man what had happened, and then commanded that the girl should be given something to eat. 'No man' rather than 'nobody' - significant here?

Chapter 6

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And he went out from thence, and came into his own country; and his disciples follow him. Jesus then traveled home, followed by his disciples. traveled? Is "home" too narrow?
2 And when the sabbath day was come, he began to teach in the synagogue: and many hearing him were astonished, saying, From whence hath this man these things? and what wisdom is this which is given unto him, that even such mighty works are wrought by his hands? On the next Sabbath, Jesus began teaching in the synagogue. Many found this marvelous and declared, "How does this man know so much? What kind of wisdom has been given to Him, enabling Him to perform such wonderful deeds? "wonderful" better than "great"; avoid "miracle" as a non-believer expression? Keep "man" to avoid emasculating Christianity.
3 Is not this the carpenter, the son of Mary, the brother of James, and Joses, and of Juda, and Simon? and are not his sisters here with us? And they were offended at him. Isn't this a mere carpenter, the son of Mary, the brother of James, Joses, Juda and Simon? Don't we also know his sisters here? The public was not open-minded about Jesus. trying the modern term "open-minded"
4 But Jesus said unto them, A prophet is not without honour, but in his own country, and among his own kin, and in his own house. Jesus replied to their complaints, "A prophet lacks honor only in his own hometown, among his neighbors and in his own home." avoid compound negative
5 And he could there do no mighty work, save that he laid his hands upon a few sick folk, and healed them. Because of the people's closed-mindedness, Jesus was unable to perform any marvelous works in that area, except for healing a few sick people by laying His hands on them. Link back to 'open-mindedness' concept introduced in verse 3
6 And he marvelled because of their unbelief. And he went round about the villages, teaching. He was surprised at their lack of faith. He traveled around the villages in that area, teaching the people who lived there. Emphasize faith; superb use of faith here!
7 And he called unto him the twelve, and began to send them forth by two and two; and gave them power over unclean spirits; He gathered the twelve, and began to send them out in pairs, giving them the power to cast out the devil. Use "devil" rather than avoiding it
8 And commanded them that they should take nothing for their journey, save a staff only; no scrip, no bread, no money in their purse: He instructed them to take only a walking stick, and to bring nothing else: no bag, no bread, and no money in their belts.
9 But be shod with sandals; and not put on two coats. To wear only sandals, and practical clothes. "simplest of clothes" is an interesting suggestion, but seems to go beyond the admonition against redundancy. A comfortable but nice garment would seem to be fine with the text.
10 And he said unto them, In what place soever ye enter into an house, there abide till ye depart from that place. He told them, "Whichever house you stay in while in a town, stay there until you leave that town."
11 And whosoever shall not receive you, nor hear you, when ye depart thence, shake off the dust under your feet for a testimony against them. Verily I say unto you, It shall be more tolerable for Sodom and Gomorrha in the day of judgment, than for that city. "And if anyone will not take you in or is closed-minded, when leaving them, shake the dust from under your feet as an indictment against their conduct. I tell you truly, the cities of Sodom and Gomorrah will fare better on the day of judgment than that city."
12 And they went out, and preached that men should repent. Thus they went among the towns, preaching repentance.
13 And they cast out many devils, and anointed with oil many that were sick, and healed them. There they cast out Satan, anointed the ill with oil, and healed them of their afflictions.
14 And king Herod heard of him; (for his name was spread abroad:) and he said, That John the Baptist was risen from the dead, and therefore mighty works do shew forth themselves in him. The tetrarch Herod heard news of this, as word of Jesus had spread fast and far. It was said that he was John the Baptist had risen from the dead, and miraculous powers were shown in his works. Difficult to convey meaning latter part in modern English. Could use less awkward translation.
15 Others said, That it is Elias. And others said, That it is a prophet, or as one of the prophets. Others rumored that he was Elijah, while others still called him a prophet like those of the Old Testament. "The prophets" was known to the audience of the time as the OT prophets, but this should be made clear to the modern reader.
16 But when Herod heard thereof, he said, It is John, whom I beheaded: he is risen from the dead. Herod succumbed to the rumors and opined, "He is John, who I had murdered, back from the dead."
17 For Herod himself had sent forth and laid hold upon John, and bound him in prison for Herodias' sake, his brother Philip's wife: for he had married her. For it had been Herod who had sent his men to capture and imprison John for his brother Philip's wife, Herodias, who he had married.
18 For John had said unto Herod, It is not lawful for thee to have thy brother's wife. John had told Herod, "It is against the law for you to marry your brother's wife."
19 Therefore Herodias had a quarrel against him, and would have killed him; but she could not: And thus Herodias had quarreled with John, and she would have killed him had she been able.
20 For Herod feared John, knowing that he was a just man and an holy, and observed him; and when he heard him, he did many things, and heard him gladly. Herod actually feared John, realizing that he was a holy and just man, and took him seriously: Herod appreciated John's preaching and sometimes tried to follow it. Perhaps no single verse in the Gospels is translated in so many different ways as this one. For example, did Herod "observe" or "protect" John as modern translations claim?
21 And when a convenient day was come, that Herod on his birthday made a supper to his lords, high captains, and chief estates of Galilee; So Herodias waited for her opportunity, which came on Herod's birthday when he had a feast for his lords, high captains, and high-ranking officials in Galilee. Explaining context of 'convenient'. Are there better modern terms for the lords and high captains?
22 And when the daughter of the said Herodias came in, and danced, and pleased Herod and them that sat with him, the king said unto the damsel, Ask of me whatsoever thou wilt, and I will give it thee. Herodias's daughter entered the room and danced, so pleasing Herod and his guests that the king exclaimed to the temptress, "Ask me whatever you like, and I will grant it!" κορασιω is typically translated simply as "girl" or "damsel",[4] but we use the term "temptress" to convey the context better.[5] The Greek language may have been inadequate to convey the immoral overtones.
23 And he sware unto her, Whatsoever thou shalt ask of me, I will give it thee, unto the half of my kingdom. And he promised her, "I will give you whatever you want from me, up to half of my kingdom."
24 And she went forth, and said unto her mother, What shall I ask? And she said, The head of John the Baptist. She went to confer with her mother, asking, "what should I ask for?" Her mother replied, "the head of John the Baptist."
25 And she came in straightway with haste unto the king, and asked, saying, I will that thou give me by and by in a charger the head of John the Baptist. So she returned quickly to the tetrarch and responded, "I want John the Baptist's head on a platter." King or Tetrarch here? Confusion of the various Herods is common. "Charger" is an archaic word for a large platter
26 And the king was exceeding sorry; yet for his oath's sake, and for their sakes which sat with him, he would not reject her. Herod did not want to grant the request, but because he took an oath and faced embarrassment in front of his guests if he declined, he complied.
27 And immediately the king sent an executioner, and commanded his head to be brought: and he went and beheaded him in the prison, The king immediately sent an executioner, ordering him to bring John the Baptist's head. The executioner went to the prison and beheaded him.
28 And brought his head in a charger, and gave it to the damsel: and the damsel gave it to her mother. The executioner brought the head on a platter and gave it to the temptress, who gave it to her mother. See notes to verse 22 above.
29 And when his disciples heard of it, they came and took up his corpse, and laid it in a tomb. When the disciples heard what had happened, they took the body of John the Baptist and placed it in a tomb.
30 And the apostles gathered themselves together unto Jesus, and told him all things, both what they had done, and what they had taught. The apostles gathered around Jesus and told him about all the things they had done and what they had taught.
31 And he said unto them, Come ye yourselves apart into a desert place, and rest a while: for there were many coming and going, and they had no leisure so much as to eat. Jesus told them, "Come with me to a quiet place and rest". Because there were so many people coming and going, the apostles had not even had time to eat. I used "quiet place" for "desert place" based on what's written in some other translations. Does this seem right?
32 And they departed into a desert place by ship privately. They sailed in a boat to a quiet place.
33 And the people saw them departing, and many knew him, and ran afoot thither out of all cities, and outwent them, and came together unto him. When people saw them leaving, many of them recognized Jesus, so they hurried from their cities and got there before Jesus and the apostles did. The people crowded around Jesus when he arrived.
34 And Jesus, when he came out, saw much people, and was moved with compassion toward them, because they were as sheep not having a shepherd: and he began to teach them many things. When Jesus got out of the boat He saw the large crowd of people, and felt sorry for them, because they reminded Him of a flock of sheep without a shepherd. So He started to teach them many things.
35 And when the day was now far spent, his disciples came unto him, and said, This is a desert place, and now the time is far passed: But when the day was nearly over, the disciples approached Jesus and said, "We're in the middle of nowhere and it is going to get dark. quotation continues to next verse; it must have been "getting dark" yet so the phrasing is this way
36 Send them away, that they may go into the country round about, and into the villages, and buy themselves bread: for they have nothing to eat. The crowd has nothing to eat, so tell them to disperse into the surrounding villages in order to buy themselves bread."
37 He answered and said unto them, Give ye them to eat. And they say unto him, Shall we go and buy two hundred pennyworth of bread, and give them to eat? Jesus replied "You should give them something to eat," and the disciples asked him "Should we go buy some bread for them?"
38 He saith unto them, How many loaves have ye? go and see. And when they knew, they say, Five, and two fishes. Jesus answered, "How many loaves do you have? Go check." After the disciples found out, they told him that they had five loaves of bread and two fish.
39 And he commanded them to make all sit down by companies upon the green grass. Jesus told the disciples to have everyone sit in groups on the grass.
40 And they sat down in ranks, by hundreds, and by fifties. After they did, everyone sat down in long lines, of fifty or a hundred people.
41 And when he had taken the five loaves and the two fishes, he looked up to heaven, and blessed, and brake the loaves, and gave them to his disciples to set before them; and the two fishes divided he among them all. When Jesus had the five loaves and two fish, he looked to heaven, blessed the food, and broke the loaves. He gave them to his disciples to feed the people, and split the two fish among everyone.
42 And they did all eat, and were filled. After everyone was finished eating, they were all full.
43 And they took up twelve baskets full of the fragments, and of the fishes. The disciples picked up twelve baskets full of crumbs and the leftovers of fish.
44 And they that did eat of the loaves were about five thousand men. Five thousand men had filled their stomachs on just two loaves of bread and five fish.
45 And straightway he constrained his disciples to get into the ship, and to go to the other side before unto Bethsaida, while he sent away the people. Then Jesus had his disciples board the ship, to go to Bethsaida ahead of him, while he bid the people farewell.
46 And when he had sent them away, he departed into a mountain to pray. After he sent the people away, he went to a mountain to pray.
47 And when even was come, the ship was in the midst of the sea, and he alone on the land. In the evening, the disciples' boat was in the middle of the lake, and he remained on the land alone.
48 And he saw them toiling in rowing; for the wind was contrary unto them: and about the fourth watch of the night he cometh unto them, walking upon the sea, and would have passed by them. He saw them rowing hard, since they were traveling into the wind: about the fourth watch of the night, he walked on the surface of the lake and came to the ship, nearly passing it. "Fourth watch of the night" means between 3 AM and 6 AM.[6]
49 But when they saw him walking upon the sea, they supposed it had been a spirit, and cried out: But when they saw him walking on water, they thought it must have been a ghost, and cried out
50 For they all saw him, and were troubled. And immediately he talked with them, and saith unto them, Be of good cheer: it is I; be not afraid. in fear. He spoke to them right away, and said, "Don't worry! It's just me, don't be afraid."
51 And he went up unto them into the ship; and the wind ceased: and they were sore amazed in themselves beyond measure, and wondered. He boarded the ship and the wind died down: they were amazed, and looked on in awe.
52 For they considered not the miracle of the loaves: for their heart was hardened. They had not understood the miracle of the loaves, because they had not opened their minds.
53 And when they had passed over, they came into the land of Gennesaret, and drew to the shore. After they crossed the lake, they came to the land of Gennesaret and pulled up to the shore.
54 And when they were come out of the ship, straightway they knew him, When they had come off the ship, everyone immediately recognized Jesus.
55 And ran through that whole region round about, and began to carry about in beds those that were sick, where they heard he was. They ran throughout the nearby area and carried all the sick people, in beds, to the place where Jesus was said to be.
56 And whithersoever he entered, into villages, or cities, or country, they laid the sick in the streets, and besought him that they might touch if it were but the border of his garment: and as many as touched him were made whole. Wherever he went - villages, cities, or the countryside - people laid the sick in the streets, and begged Jesus to let them touch him, even just the edge of his coat. Everyone who touched him was healed.

Chapter 7

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 Then came together unto him the Pharisees, and certain of the scribes, which came from Jerusalem. Jesus was approached by the Pharisees, and some of the scribes, who came from Jerusalem. "who" rather than "which"; a rare flaw in the style of the KJV is its use of "which" and "that" to refer to persons
2 And when they saw some of his disciples eat bread with defiled, that is to say, with unwashen, hands, they found fault. They observed several disciples eating bread without first washing their hands, and used that to criticize Jesus. is "defiled" necessary here?
3 For the Pharisees, and all the Jews, except they wash their hands oft, eat not, holding the tradition of the elders. The reason for this was that the Pharisees, along with all the other Jews, had a tradition never to eat unless they had washed their hands. Move to past tense to fit the rest of the passage.
4 And when they come from the market, except they wash, they eat not. And many other things there be, which they have received to hold, as the washing of cups, and pots, brasen vessels, and of tables. When the come from the market, they do not eat unless they have washed first. They retain many other traditions, such as the washing of cups, bots, kettles, and tables.
5 Then the Pharisees and scribes asked him, Why walk not thy disciples according to the tradition of the elders, but eat bread with unwashen hands? Then the Pharisees and the scribes asked Jesus, "Why don't your disciples follow the traditions of their elders, instead of eating bread with unwashed hands?"
6 He answered and said unto them, Well hath Esaias prophesied of you hypocrites, as it is written, This people honoureth me with their lips, but their heart is far from me. He responded to them, "Isaiah prophesied about you hypocrites, according to scripture: 'These people speak respectful words to me, by their hearts are not with me.
7 Howbeit in vain do they worship me, teaching for doctrines the commandments of men. They worship me in vain, and their teachings are nothing more than rules made by men.
8 For laying aside the commandment of God, ye hold the tradition of men, as the washing of pots and cups: and many other such like things ye do. After turning away from the law of God, you cling to the rules of mere men.'
9 And he said unto them, Full well ye reject the commandment of God, that ye may keep your own tradition. Isaiah also told them, 'You turn your backs on the commandment of God, in order to cling to your own customs.' Clarify the reference to Isaiah, which is ambiguous in most translations.
10 For Moses said, Honour thy father and thy mother; and, Whoso curseth father or mother, let him die the death: For Moses said, 'Honor your father and mother; and whoever curses his father or mother should receive the death penalty'; should outer quotations be added? Use the "death penalty"
11 But ye say, If a man shall say to his father or mother, It is Corban, that is to say, a gift, by whatsoever thou mightest be profited by me; he shall be free. But you insist that if a man says to his parent, 'Whatever help I might have given you was instead given to God as a temple offering,' difficult to translate; more improvement welcome; issue of outside quotations remains; Corban replaced by "temple offering"
12 And ye suffer him no more to do ought for his father or his mother; and you excused him from helping his father or mother. excused, or prohibited?
13 Making the word of God of none effect through your tradition, which ye have delivered: and many such like things do ye. "You have made God's word and law useless with your tradition of revision, and many other actions like it."
14 And when he had called all the people unto him, he said unto them, Hearken unto me every one of you, and understand: When Jesus had called the people together around him, he said, "Listen to me, each of you, and know the truth."
15 There is nothing from without a man, that entering into him can defile him: but the things which come out of him, those are they that defile the man. "Nothing outside a man can enter him and corrupt him. Instead, that which comes from within can corrupt him." Interesting as this is also a doctrine in Plato (see the apology). Was he inspired by God, or perhaps did Jesus know earlier doctrines?
16 If any man have ears to hear, let him hear. "So if anyone wishes to know the truth, let him listen." "ears to hear" denotes the open minded listener
17 And when he was entered into the house from the people, his disciples asked him concerning the parable. After, when he had left the people and entered the house, the disciples asked him about the parable.
18 And he saith unto them, Are ye so without understanding also? Do ye not perceive, that whatsoever thing from without entereth into the man, it cannot defile him; To this he responded, "Are you also so ignorant? Don't you see that anything which enters a man from outside cannot corrupt him,"
19 Because it entereth not into his heart, but into the belly, and goeth out into the draught, purging all meats? "Because it enters his stomach, not his heart, and is then expelled from his body?"
20 And he said, That which cometh out of the man, that defileth the man. To this he added, "Anything that comes out of a man, it is that which corrupts him."
21 For from within, out of the heart of men, proceed evil thoughts, adulteries, fornications, murders, "Because, from inside of the heart come evil thoughts, adultery, fornication, murder,"
22 Thefts, covetousness, wickedness, deceit, lasciviousness, an evil eye, blasphemy, pride, foolishness: "theft, covetousness, wickedness, deceit, lustfulness, an evil eye, blasphemy, unwarranted pride, and foolishness."
23 All these evil things come from within, and defile the man. "All of these come from inside a man and corrupt him."
24 And from thence he arose, and went into the borders of Tyre and Sidon, and entered into an house, and would have no man know it: but he could not be hid.
25 For a certain woman, whose young daughter had an unclean spirit, heard of him, and came and fell at his feet:
26 The woman was a Greek, a Syrophenician by nation; and she besought him that he would cast forth the devil out of her daughter.
27 But Jesus said unto her, Let the children first be filled: for it is not meet to take the children's bread, and to cast it unto the dogs.
28 And she answered and said unto him, Yes, Lord: yet the dogs under the table eat of the children's crumbs.
29 And he said unto her, For this saying go thy way; the devil is gone out of thy daughter.
30 And when she was come to her house, she found the devil gone out, and her daughter laid upon the bed.
31 And again, departing from the coasts of Tyre and Sidon, he came unto the sea of Galilee, through the midst of the coasts of Decapolis.
32 And they bring unto him one that was deaf, and had an impediment in his speech; and they beseech him to put his hand upon him.
33 And he took him aside from the multitude, and put his fingers into his ears, and he spit, and touched his tongue;
34 And looking up to heaven, he sighed, and saith unto him, Ephphatha, that is, Be opened.
35 And straightway his ears were opened, and the string of his tongue was loosed, and he spake plain.
36 And he charged them that they should tell no man: but the more he charged them, so much the more a great deal they published it;
37 And were beyond measure astonished, saying, He hath done all things well: he maketh both the deaf to hear, and the dumb to speak.

Chapter 8

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1 In those days the multitude being very great, and having nothing to eat, Jesus called his disciples unto him, and saith unto them,
2 I have compassion on the multitude, because they have now been with me three days, and have nothing to eat:
3 And if I send them away fasting to their own houses, they will faint by the way: for divers of them came from far.
4 And his disciples answered him, From whence can a man satisfy these men with bread here in the wilderness?
5 And he asked them, How many loaves have ye? And they said, Seven.
6 And he commanded the people to sit down on the ground: and he took the seven loaves, and gave thanks, and brake, and gave to his disciples to set before them; and they did set them before the people.
7 And they had a few small fishes: and he blessed, and commanded to set them also before them.
8 So they did eat, and were filled: and they took up of the broken meat that was left seven baskets.
9 And they that had eaten were about four thousand: and he sent them away.
10 And straightway he entered into a ship with his disciples, and came into the parts of Dalmanutha.
11 And the Pharisees came forth, and began to question with him, seeking of him a sign from heaven, tempting him.
12 And he sighed deeply in his spirit, and saith, Why doth this generation seek after a sign? verily I say unto you, There shall no sign be given unto this generation.
13 And he left them, and entering into the ship again departed to the other side.
14 Now the disciples had forgotten to take bread, neither had they in the ship with them more than one loaf.
15 And he charged them, saying, Take heed, beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, and of the leaven of Herod.
16 And they reasoned among themselves, saying, It is because we have no bread.
17 And when Jesus knew it, he saith unto them, Why reason ye, because ye have no bread? perceive ye not yet, neither understand? have ye your heart yet hardened?
18 Having eyes, see ye not? and having ears, hear ye not? and do ye not remember?
19 When I brake the five loaves among five thousand, how many baskets full of fragments took ye up? They say unto him, Twelve.
20 And when the seven among four thousand, how many baskets full of fragments took ye up? And they said, Seven.
21 And he said unto them, How is it that ye do not understand?
22 And he cometh to Bethsaida; and they bring a blind man unto him, and besought him to touch him.
23 And he took the blind man by the hand, and led him out of the town; and when he had spit on his eyes, and put his hands upon him, he asked him if he saw ought.
24 And he looked up, and said, I see men as trees, walking.
25 After that he put his hands again upon his eyes, and made him look up: and he was restored, and saw every man clearly.
26 And he sent him away to his house, saying, Neither go into the town, nor tell it to any in the town.
27 And Jesus went out, and his disciples, into the towns of Caesarea Philippi: and by the way he asked his disciples, saying unto them, Whom do men say that I am?
28 And they answered, John the Baptist: but some say, Elias; and others, One of the prophets.
29 And he saith unto them, But whom say ye that I am? And Peter answereth and saith unto him, Thou art the Christ.
30 And he charged them that they should tell no man of him.
31 And he began to teach them, that the Son of man must suffer many things, and be rejected of the elders, and of the chief priests, and scribes, and be killed, and after three days rise again.
32 And he spake that saying openly. And Peter took him, and began to rebuke him.
33 But when he had turned about and looked on his disciples, he rebuked Peter, saying, Get thee behind me, Satan: for thou savourest not the things that be of God, but the things that be of men.
34 And when he had called the people unto him with his disciples also, he said unto them, Whosoever will come after me, let him deny himself, and take up his cross, and follow me.
35 For whosoever will save his life shall lose it; but whosoever shall lose his life for my sake and the gospel's, the same shall save it.
36 For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?
37 Or what shall a man give in exchange for his soul?
38 Whosoever therefore shall be ashamed of me and of my words in this adulterous and sinful generation; of him also shall the Son of man be ashamed, when he cometh in the glory of his Father with the holy angels.

Chapter 9

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1 And he said unto them, Verily I say unto you, That there be some of them that stand here, which shall not taste of death, till they have seen the kingdom of God come with power.
2 And after six days Jesus taketh with him Peter, and James, and John, and leadeth them up into an high mountain apart by themselves: and he was transfigured before them.
3 And his raiment became shining, exceeding white as snow; so as no fuller on earth can white them.
4 And there appeared unto them Elias with Moses: and they were talking with Jesus.
5 And Peter answered and said to Jesus, Master, it is good for us to be here: and let us make three tabernacles; one for thee, and one for Moses, and one for Elias.
6 For he wist not what to say; for they were sore afraid.
7 And there was a cloud that overshadowed them: and a voice came out of the cloud, saying, This is my beloved Son: hear him.
8 And suddenly, when they had looked round about, they saw no man any more, save Jesus only with themselves.
9 And as they came down from the mountain, he charged them that they should tell no man what things they had seen, till the Son of man were risen from the dead.
10 And they kept that saying with themselves, questioning one with another what the rising from the dead should mean.
11 And they asked him, saying, Why say the scribes that Elias must first come?
12 And he answered and told them, Elias verily cometh first, and restoreth all things; and how it is written of the Son of man, that he must suffer many things, and be set at nought.
13 But I say unto you, That Elias is indeed come, and they have done unto him whatsoever they listed, as it is written of him.
14 And when he came to his disciples, he saw a great multitude about them, and the scribes questioning with them.
15 And straightway all the people, when they beheld him, were greatly amazed, and running to him saluted him.
16 And he asked the scribes, What question ye with them?
17 And one of the multitude answered and said, Master, I have brought unto thee my son, which hath a dumb spirit;
18 And wheresoever he taketh him, he teareth him: and he foameth, and gnasheth with his teeth, and pineth away: and I spake to thy disciples that they should cast him out; and they could not.
19 He answereth him, and saith, O faithless generation, how long shall I be with you? how long shall I suffer you? bring him unto me.
20 And they brought him unto him: and when he saw him, straightway the spirit tare him; and he fell on the ground, and wallowed foaming.
21 And he asked his father, How long is it ago since this came unto him? And he said, Of a child.
22 And ofttimes it hath cast him into the fire, and into the waters, to destroy him: but if thou canst do any thing, have compassion on us, and help us.
23 Jesus said unto him, If thou canst believe, all things are possible to him that believeth.
24 And straightway the father of the child cried out, and said with tears, Lord, I believe; help thou mine unbelief.
25 When Jesus saw that the people came running together, he rebuked the foul spirit, saying unto him, Thou dumb and deaf spirit, I charge thee, come out of him, and enter no more into him.
26 And the spirit cried, and rent him sore, and came out of him: and he was as one dead; insomuch that many said, He is dead.
27 But Jesus took him by the hand, and lifted him up; and he arose.
28 And when he was come into the house, his disciples asked him privately, Why could not we cast him out?
29 And he said unto them, This kind can come forth by nothing, but by prayer and fasting.
30 And they departed thence, and passed through Galilee; and he would not that any man should know it.
31 For he taught his disciples, and said unto them, The Son of man is delivered into the hands of men, and they shall kill him; and after that he is killed, he shall rise the third day.
32 But they understood not that saying, and were afraid to ask him.
33 And he came to Capernaum: and being in the house he asked them, What was it that ye disputed among yourselves by the way?
34 But they held their peace: for by the way they had disputed among themselves, who should be the greatest.
35 And he sat down, and called the twelve, and saith unto them, If any man desire to be first, the same shall be last of all, and servant of all.
36 And he took a child, and set him in the midst of them: and when he had taken him in his arms, he said unto them,
37 Whosoever shall receive one of such children in my name, receiveth me: and whosoever shall receive me, receiveth not me, but him that sent me.
38 And John answered him, saying, Master, we saw one casting out devils in thy name, and he followeth not us: and we forbad him, because he followeth not us.
39 But Jesus said, Forbid him not: for there is no man which shall do a miracle in my name, that can lightly speak evil of me.
40 For he that is not against us is on our part.
41 For whosoever shall give you a cup of water to drink in my name, because ye belong to Christ, verily I say unto you, he shall not lose his reward.
42 And whosoever shall offend one of these little ones that believe in me, it is better for him that a millstone were hanged about his neck, and he were cast into the sea.
43 And if thy hand offend thee, cut it off: it is better for thee to enter into life maimed, than having two hands to go into hell, into the fire that never shall be quenched:
44 Where their worm dieth not, and the fire is not quenched.
45 And if thy foot offend thee, cut it off: it is better for thee to enter halt into life, than having two feet to be cast into hell, into the fire that never shall be quenched:
46 Where their worm dieth not, and the fire is not quenched.
47 And if thine eye offend thee, pluck it out: it is better for thee to enter into the kingdom of God with one eye, than having two eyes to be cast into hell fire:
48 Where their worm dieth not, and the fire is not quenched.
49 For every one shall be salted with fire, and every sacrifice shall be salted with salt.
50 Salt is good: but if the salt have lost his saltness, wherewith will ye season it? Have salt in yourselves, and have peace one with another.

Chapter 10

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And he arose from thence, and cometh into the coasts of Judaea by the farther side of Jordan: and the people resort unto him again; and, as he was wont, he taught them again.
2 And the Pharisees came to him, and asked him, Is it lawful for a man to put away his wife? tempting him.
3 And he answered and said unto them, What did Moses command you?
4 And they said, Moses suffered to write a bill of divorcement, and to put her away.
5 And Jesus answered and said unto them, For the hardness of your heart he wrote you this precept.
6 But from the beginning of the creation God made them male and female.
7 For this cause shall a man leave his father and mother, and cleave to his wife;
8 And they twain shall be one flesh: so then they are no more twain, but one flesh.
9 What therefore God hath joined together, let not man put asunder.
10 And in the house his disciples asked him again of the same matter.
11 And he saith unto them, Whosoever shall put away his wife, and marry another, committeth adultery against her.
12 And if a woman shall put away her husband, and be married to another, she committeth adultery.
13 And they brought young children to him, that he should touch them: and his disciples rebuked those that brought them.
14 But when Jesus saw it, he was much displeased, and said unto them, Suffer the little children to come unto me, and forbid them not: for of such is the kingdom of God.
15 Verily I say unto you, Whosoever shall not receive the kingdom of God as a little child, he shall not enter therein.
16 And he took them up in his arms, put his hands upon them, and blessed them.
17 And when he was gone forth into the way, there came one running, and kneeled to him, and asked him, Good Master, what shall I do that I may inherit eternal life?
18 And Jesus said unto him, Why callest thou me good? there is none good but one, that is, God.
19 Thou knowest the commandments, Do not commit adultery, Do not kill, Do not steal, Do not bear false witness, Defraud not, Honour thy father and mother.
20 And he answered and said unto him, Master, all these have I observed from my youth.
21 Then Jesus beholding him loved him, and said unto him, One thing thou lackest: go thy way, sell whatsoever thou hast, and give to the poor, and thou shalt have treasure in heaven: and come, take up the cross, and follow me.
22 And he was sad at that saying, and went away grieved: for he had great possessions.
23 And Jesus looked round about, and saith unto his disciples, How hardly shall they that have riches enter into the kingdom of God!
24 And the disciples were astonished at his words. But Jesus answereth again, and saith unto them, Children, how hard is it for them that trust in riches to enter into the kingdom of God!
25 It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle, than for a rich man to enter into the kingdom of God.
26 And they were astonished out of measure, saying among themselves, Who then can be saved?
27 And Jesus looking upon them saith, With men it is impossible, but not with God: for with God all things are possible.
28 Then Peter began to say unto him, Lo, we have left all, and have followed thee.
29 And Jesus answered and said, Verily I say unto you, There is no man that hath left house, or brethren, or sisters, or father, or mother, or wife, or children, or lands, for my sake, and the gospel's,
30 But he shall receive an hundredfold now in this time, houses, and brethren, and sisters, and mothers, and children, and lands, with persecutions; and in the world to come eternal life.
31 But many that are first shall be last; and the last first.
32 And they were in the way going up to Jerusalem; and Jesus went before them: and they were amazed; and as they followed, they were afraid. And he took again the twelve, and began to tell them what things should happen unto him,
33 Saying, Behold, we go up to Jerusalem; and the Son of man shall be delivered unto the chief priests, and unto the scribes; and they shall condemn him to death, and shall deliver him to the Gentiles:
34 And they shall mock him, and shall scourge him, and shall spit upon him, and shall kill him: and the third day he shall rise again.
35 And James and John, the sons of Zebedee, come unto him, saying, Master, we would that thou shouldest do for us whatsoever we shall desire.
36 And he said unto them, What would ye that I should do for you?
37 They said unto him, Grant unto us that we may sit, one on thy right hand, and the other on thy left hand, in thy glory.
38 But Jesus said unto them, Ye know not what ye ask: can ye drink of the cup that I drink of? and be baptized with the baptism that I am baptized with?
39 And they said unto him, We can. And Jesus said unto them, Ye shall indeed drink of the cup that I drink of; and with the baptism that I am baptized withal shall ye be baptized:
40 But to sit on my right hand and on my left hand is not mine to give; but it shall be given to them for whom it is prepared.
41 And when the ten heard it, they began to be much displeased with James and John.
42 But Jesus called them to him, and saith unto them, Ye know that they which are accounted to rule over the Gentiles exercise lordship over them; and their great ones exercise authority upon them.
43 But so shall it not be among you: but whosoever will be great among you, shall be your minister:
44 And whosoever of you will be the chiefest, shall be servant of all.
45 For even the Son of man came not to be ministered unto, but to minister, and to give his life a ransom for many.
46 And they came to Jericho: and as he went out of Jericho with his disciples and a great number of people, blind Bartimaeus, the son of Timaeus, sat by the highway side begging.
47 And when he heard that it was Jesus of Nazareth, he began to cry out, and say, Jesus, thou Son of David, have mercy on me.
48 And many charged him that he should hold his peace: but he cried the more a great deal, Thou Son of David, have mercy on me.
49 And Jesus stood still, and commanded him to be called. And they call the blind man, saying unto him, Be of good comfort, rise; he calleth thee.
50 And he, casting away his garment, rose, and came to Jesus.
51 And Jesus answered and said unto him, What wilt thou that I should do unto thee? The blind man said unto him, Lord, that I might receive my sight.
52 And Jesus said unto him, Go thy way; thy faith hath made thee whole. And immediately he received his sight, and followed Jesus in the way.

Chapter 11

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And when they came nigh to Jerusalem, unto Bethphage and Bethany, at the mount of Olives, he sendeth forth two of his disciples,
2 And saith unto them, Go your way into the village over against you: and as soon as ye be entered into it, ye shall find a colt tied, whereon never man sat; loose him, and bring him.
3 And if any man say unto you, Why do ye this? say ye that the Lord hath need of him; and straightway he will send him hither.
4 And they went their way, and found the colt tied by the door without in a place where two ways met; and they loose him.
5 And certain of them that stood there said unto them, What do ye, loosing the colt?
6 And they said unto them even as Jesus had commanded: and they let them go.
7 And they brought the colt to Jesus, and cast their garments on him; and he sat upon him.
8 And many spread their garments in the way: and others cut down branches off the trees, and strawed them in the way.
9 And they that went before, and they that followed, cried, saying, Hosanna; Blessed is he that cometh in the name of the Lord:
10 Blessed be the kingdom of our father David, that cometh in the name of the Lord: Hosanna in the highest.
11 And Jesus entered into Jerusalem, and into the temple: and when he had looked round about upon all things, and now the eventide was come, he went out unto Bethany with the twelve.
12 And on the morrow, when they were come from Bethany, he was hungry:
13 And seeing a fig tree afar off having leaves, he came, if haply he might find any thing thereon: and when he came to it, he found nothing but leaves; for the time of figs was not yet.
14 And Jesus answered and said unto it, No man eat fruit of thee hereafter for ever. And his disciples heard it.
15 And they come to Jerusalem: and Jesus went into the temple, and began to cast out them that sold and bought in the temple, and overthrew the tables of the moneychangers, and the seats of them that sold doves;
16 And would not suffer that any man should carry any vessel through the temple.
17 And he taught, saying unto them, Is it not written, My house shall be called of all nations the house of prayer? but ye have made it a den of thieves.
18 And the scribes and chief priests heard it, and sought how they might destroy him: for they feared him, because all the people was astonished at his doctrine.
19 And when even was come, he went out of the city.
20 And in the morning, as they passed by, they saw the fig tree dried up from the roots.
21 And Peter calling to remembrance saith unto him, Master, behold, the fig tree which thou cursedst is withered away.
22 And Jesus answering saith unto them, Have faith in God.
23 For verily I say unto you, That whosoever shall say unto this mountain, Be thou removed, and be thou cast into the sea; and shall not doubt in his heart, but shall believe that those things which he saith shall come to pass; he shall have whatsoever he saith.
24 Therefore I say unto you, What things soever ye desire, when ye pray, believe that ye receive them, and ye shall have them.
25 And when ye stand praying, forgive, if ye have ought against any: that your Father also which is in heaven may forgive you your trespasses.
26 But if ye do not forgive, neither will your Father which is in heaven forgive your trespasses.
27 And they come again to Jerusalem: and as he was walking in the temple, there come to him the chief priests, and the scribes, and the elders,
28 And say unto him, By what authority doest thou these things? and who gave thee this authority to do these things?
29 And Jesus answered and said unto them, I will also ask of you one question, and answer me, and I will tell you by what authority I do these things.
30 The baptism of John, was it from heaven, or of men? answer me.
31 And they reasoned with themselves, saying, If we shall say, From heaven; he will say, Why then did ye not believe him?
32 But if we shall say, Of men; they feared the people: for all men counted John, that he was a prophet indeed.
33 And they answered and said unto Jesus, We cannot tell. And Jesus answering saith unto them, Neither do I tell you by what authority I do these things.

Chapter 12

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And he began to speak unto them by parables. A certain man planted a vineyard, and set an hedge about it, and digged a place for the winefat, and built a tower, and let it out to husbandmen, and went into a far country.
2 And at the season he sent to the husbandmen a servant, that he might receive from the husbandmen of the fruit of the vineyard.
3 And they caught him, and beat him, and sent him away empty.
4 And again he sent unto them another servant; and at him they cast stones, and wounded him in the head, and sent him away shamefully handled.
5 And again he sent another; and him they killed, and many others; beating some, and killing some.
6 Having yet therefore one son, his wellbeloved, he sent him also last unto them, saying, They will reverence my son.
7 But those husbandmen said among themselves, This is the heir; come, let us kill him, and the inheritance shall be ours.
8 And they took him, and killed him, and cast him out of the vineyard.
9 What shall therefore the lord of the vineyard do? he will come and destroy the husbandmen, and will give the vineyard unto others.
10 And have ye not read this scripture; The stone which the builders rejected is become the head of the corner:
11 This was the Lord's doing, and it is marvellous in our eyes?
12 And they sought to lay hold on him, but feared the people: for they knew that he had spoken the parable against them: and they left him, and went their way.
13 And they send unto him certain of the Pharisees and of the Herodians, to catch him in his words.
14 And when they were come, they say unto him, Master, we know that thou art true, and carest for no man: for thou regardest not the person of men, but teachest the way of God in truth: Is it lawful to give tribute to Caesar, or not?
15 Shall we give, or shall we not give? But he, knowing their hypocrisy, said unto them, Why tempt ye me? bring me a penny, that I may see it.
16 And they brought it. And he saith unto them, Whose is this image and superscription? And they said unto him, Caesar's.
17 And Jesus answering said unto them, Render to Caesar the things that are Caesar's, and to God the things that are God's. And they marvelled at him.
18 Then come unto him the Sadducees, which say there is no resurrection; and they asked him, saying,
19 Master, Moses wrote unto us, If a man's brother die, and leave his wife behind him, and leave no children, that his brother should take his wife, and raise up seed unto his brother.
20 Now there were seven brethren: and the first took a wife, and dying left no seed.
21 And the second took her, and died, neither left he any seed: and the third likewise.
22 And the seven had her, and left no seed: last of all the woman died also.
23 In the resurrection therefore, when they shall rise, whose wife shall she be of them? for the seven had her to wife.
24 And Jesus answering said unto them, Do ye not therefore err, because ye know not the scriptures, neither the power of God?
25 For when they shall rise from the dead, they neither marry, nor are given in marriage; but are as the angels which are in heaven.
26 And as touching the dead, that they rise: have ye not read in the book of Moses, how in the bush God spake unto him, saying, I am the God of Abraham, and the God of Isaac, and the God of Jacob?
27 He is not the God of the dead, but the God of the living: ye therefore do greatly err.
28 And one of the scribes came, and having heard them reasoning together, and perceiving that he had answered them well, asked him, Which is the first commandment of all?
29 And Jesus answered him, The first of all the commandments is, Hear, O Israel; The Lord our God is one Lord:
30 And thou shalt love the Lord thy God with all thy heart, and with all thy soul, and with all thy mind, and with all thy strength: this is the first commandment.
31 And the second is like, namely this, Thou shalt love thy neighbour as thyself. There is none other commandment greater than these.
32 And the scribe said unto him, Well, Master, thou hast said the truth: for there is one God; and there is none other but he:
33 And to love him with all the heart, and with all the understanding, and with all the soul, and with all the strength, and to love his neighbour as himself, is more than all whole burnt offerings and sacrifices.
34 And when Jesus saw that he answered discreetly, he said unto him, Thou art not far from the kingdom of God. And no man after that durst ask him any question.
35 And Jesus answered and said, while he taught in the temple, How say the scribes that Christ is the Son of David?
36 For David himself said by the Holy Ghost, The Lord said to my Lord, Sit thou on my right hand, till I make thine enemies thy footstool.
37 David therefore himself calleth him Lord; and whence is he then his son? And the common people heard him gladly.
38 And he said unto them in his doctrine, Beware of the scribes, which love to go in long clothing, and love salutations in the marketplaces,
39 And the chief seats in the synagogues, and the uppermost rooms at feasts:
40 Which devour widows' houses, and for a pretence make long prayers: these shall receive greater damnation.
41 And Jesus sat over against the treasury, and beheld how the people cast money into the treasury: and many that were rich cast in much.
42 And there came a certain poor widow, and she threw in two mites, which make a farthing.
43 And he called unto him his disciples, and saith unto them, Verily I say unto you, That this poor widow hath cast more in, than all they which have cast into the treasury:
44 For all they did cast in of their abundance; but she of her want did cast in all that she had, even all her living.

Chapter 13

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And as he went out of the temple, one of his disciples saith unto him, Master, see what manner of stones and what buildings are here!
2 And Jesus answering said unto him, Seest thou these great buildings? there shall not be left one stone upon another, that shall not be thrown down.
3 And as he sat upon the mount of Olives over against the temple, Peter and James and John and Andrew asked him privately,
4 Tell us, when shall these things be? and what shall be the sign when all these things shall be fulfilled?
5 And Jesus answering them began to say, Take heed lest any man deceive you:
6 For many shall come in my name, saying, I am Christ; and shall deceive many.
7 And when ye shall hear of wars and rumours of wars, be ye not troubled: for such things must needs be; but the end shall not be yet.
8 For nation shall rise against nation, and kingdom against kingdom: and there shall be earthquakes in divers places, and there shall be famines and troubles: these are the beginnings of sorrows.
9 But take heed to yourselves: for they shall deliver you up to councils; and in the synagogues ye shall be beaten: and ye shall be brought before rulers and kings for my sake, for a testimony against them.
10 And the gospel must first be published among all nations.
11 But when they shall lead you, and deliver you up, take no thought beforehand what ye shall speak, neither do ye premeditate: but whatsoever shall be given you in that hour, that speak ye: for it is not ye that speak, but the Holy Ghost.
12 Now the brother shall betray the brother to death, and the father the son; and children shall rise up against their parents, and shall cause them to be put to death.
13 And ye shall be hated of all men for my name's sake: but he that shall endure unto the end, the same shall be saved.
14 But when ye shall see the abomination of desolation, spoken of by Daniel the prophet, standing where it ought not, (let him that readeth understand,) then let them that be in Judaea flee to the mountains:
15 And let him that is on the housetop not go down into the house, neither enter therein, to take any thing out of his house:
16 And let him that is in the field not turn back again for to take up his garment.
17 But woe to them that are with child, and to them that give suck in those days!
18 And pray ye that your flight be not in the winter.
19 For in those days shall be affliction, such as was not from the beginning of the creation which God created unto this time, neither shall be.
20 And except that the Lord had shortened those days, no flesh should be saved: but for the elect's sake, whom he hath chosen, he hath shortened the days.
21 And then if any man shall say to you, Lo, here is Christ; or, lo, he is there; believe him not:
22 For false Christs and false prophets shall rise, and shall shew signs and wonders, to seduce, if it were possible, even the elect.
23 But take ye heed: behold, I have foretold you all things.
24 But in those days, after that tribulation, the sun shall be darkened, and the moon shall not give her light,
25 And the stars of heaven shall fall, and the powers that are in heaven shall be shaken.
26 And then shall they see the Son of man coming in the clouds with great power and glory.
27 And then shall he send his angels, and shall gather together his elect from the four winds, from the uttermost part of the earth to the uttermost part of heaven.
28 Now learn a parable of the fig tree; When her branch is yet tender, and putteth forth leaves, ye know that summer is near:
29 So ye in like manner, when ye shall see these things come to pass, know that it is nigh, even at the doors.
30 Verily I say unto you, that this generation shall not pass, till all these things be done.
31 Heaven and earth shall pass away: but my words shall not pass away.
32 But of that day and that hour knoweth no man, no, not the angels which are in heaven, neither the Son, but the Father.
33 Take ye heed, watch and pray: for ye know not when the time is.
34 For the Son of man is as a man taking a far journey, who left his house, and gave authority to his servants, and to every man his work, and commanded the porter to watch.
35 Watch ye therefore: for ye know not when the master of the house cometh, at even, or at midnight, or at the cockcrowing, or in the morning:
36 Lest coming suddenly he find you sleeping.
37 And what I say unto you I say unto all, Watch.

Chapter 14

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 After two days was the feast of the passover, and of unleavened bread: and the chief priests and the scribes sought how they might take him by craft, and put him to death. Two days later, it was time for the the passover holiday of unleavened bread, and the chief priests and scribes were trying to figure out how to catch him by deceit and kill him.
2 But they said, Not on the feast day, lest there be an uproar of the people. But they said, "Not on the holiday; the mob will get upset."
3 And being in Bethany in the house of Simon the leper, as he sat at meat, there came a woman having an alabaster box of ointment of spikenard very precious; and she brake the box, and poured it on his head. At that time, he was in Bethany at Simon the leper's house, having a meal. A woman came in with an expensive white crystal container of valerian oil, which she opened and poured over his head.
4 And there were some that had indignation within themselves, and said, Why was this waste of the ointment made? Some of the onlookers were shocked, saying "Why did she waste that nice oil like that?
5 For it might have been sold for more than three hundred pence, and have been given to the poor. And they murmured against her. We could have sold that for more than three dollars and charitably donated the money to the poor!" They kept whispering about what a bad thing she had done.
6 And Jesus said, Let her alone; why trouble ye her? she hath wrought a good work on me. But Jesus said, "Leave her alone; why are you bothering her? She had done something good.
7 For ye have the poor with you always, and whensoever ye will ye may do them good: but me ye have not always. There will always be poor people around, and whenever you feel like helping them you can, but I am not going to be around forever.
8 She hath done what she could: she is come aforehand to anoint my body to the burying. She did what she could: She came in advance to get my body ready for burial.
9 Verily I say unto you, Wheresoever this gospel shall be preached throughout the whole world, this also that she hath done shall be spoken of for a memorial of her. I'm telling the truth: Anywhere in the world that people preach the good news about me, they are also going to remember what she did and talk about it."
10 And Judas Iscariot, one of the twelve, went unto the chief priests, to betray him unto them. After that, Judas Iscariot, one of the twelve apostles, went to betray Jesus to the chief priests,
11 And when they heard it, they were glad, and promised to give him money. And he sought how he might conveniently betray him. who were happy to hear about it and offered to pay him off. So Judas thought about how it would be most convenient to do the deed.
12 And the first day of unleavened bread, when they killed the passover, his disciples said unto him, Where wilt thou that we go and prepare that thou mayest eat the passover? So on the first day of the Passover holiday, after they killed the lamb, Jesus's disciples said to him, "Hey, where do you want us to go and get this lamb ready for you to eat?"
13 And he sendeth forth two of his disciples, and saith unto them, Go ye into the city, and there shall meet you a man bearing a pitcher of water: follow him. He answered by sending two of the disciples to go to town. "Go into the city, and you'll find a man carrying a pitcher of water. Follow this guy.
14 And wheresoever he shall go in, say ye to the goodman of the house, The Master saith, Where is the guestchamber, where I shall eat the passover with my disciples? If he goes into a house, tell the man in charge, 'Our master wants to know where the guestroom is, so we can eat our lamb.'
15 And he will shew you a large upper room furnished and prepared: there make ready for us. He will show you a big room on the second floor. The room is already set for us, so you just get yourselves ready there."
16 And his disciples went forth, and came into the city, and found as he had said unto them: and they made ready the passover. So the disciples went into town, and it happened exactly like he had told them, so they got the lamb ready to eat.
17 And in the evening he cometh with the twelve. That evening, Jesus and the twelve all showed up there.
18 And as they sat and did eat, Jesus said, Verily I say unto you, One of you which eateth with me shall betray me. While they were sitting and eating, Jesus said, "I'm serious: One of you guys is going to betray me."
19 And they began to be sorrowful, and to say unto him one by one, Is it I? and another said, Is it I? They became very upset, and one after another said, "Are you talking to me?" "Is it me?"
20 And he answered and said unto them, It is one of the twelve, that dippeth with me in the dish. Jesus told them, "It is one of you - the one who dips his bread in the bowl with me.
21 The Son of man indeed goeth, as it is written of him: but woe to that man by whom the Son of man is betrayed! good were it for that man if he had never been born. The Son of man really walks the earth, as the scriptures said, but as for the man who betrays the Son of man, he would have been better off if he'd never been born."
22 And as they did eat, Jesus took bread, and blessed, and brake it, and gave to them, and said, Take, eat: this is my body. And while they were eating, Jesus took the bread, blessed it, broke it, and distributed it, saying "Take this and eat it. It's my body."
23 And he took the cup, and when he had given thanks, he gave it to them: and they all drank of it. And he took the cup, said a prayer, and passed it around, and everybody drank some.
24 And he said unto them, This is my blood of the new testament, which is shed for many. Then he said to them, "This is my blood of the new testament, which I bled for the sake of many people.
25 Verily I say unto you, I will drink no more of the fruit of the vine, until that day that I drink it new in the kingdom of God. I'm serious; I'm not drinking any more wine until the day I drink it new in the kingdom of God."
26 And when they had sung an hymn, they went out into the mount of Olives. Then, after they had sung a hymn, they went out into the Mount of Olives,
27 And Jesus saith unto them, All ye shall be offended because of me this night: for it is written, I will smite the shepherd, and the sheep shall be scattered. where Jesus told them, "All of you guys are going to have big problems tonight because of me. You see, it's written that I'm going to whack the shepherd, and then the sheep will be scattered all over the place.
28 But after that I am risen, I will go before you into Galilee. But after I rise, I'm going to go into Galilee ahead of you."
29 But Peter said unto him, Although all shall be offended, yet will not I. But Peter said, "Even if there's trouble for everyone, I won't have a problem with anything."
30 And Jesus saith unto him, Verily I say unto thee, That this day, even in this night, before the cock crow twice, thou shalt deny me thrice. And Jesus said to him, "Hear me now, and believe me later. Today-- No, tonight, before the rooster crows twice, you are going to disown me three times."
31 But he spake the more vehemently, If I should die with thee, I will not deny thee in any wise. Likewise also said they all. But Peter protested, with agitation, "Even if I end up having to die with you, I'll never disown you." Everyone chimed in to say the same.
32 And they came to a place which was named Gethsemane: and he saith to his disciples, Sit ye here, while I shall pray. By now, they were at a place called Gethsemane. Jesus told his disciples, "Take a seat here, everyone. I want to pray."
33 And he taketh with him Peter and James and John, and began to be sore amazed, and to be very heavy; Then he went away from them, taking Peter, James, and John, and he became very upset and distressed.
34 And saith unto them, My soul is exceeding sorrowful unto death: tarry ye here, and watch. He said to them, "My soul is dying of sadness. Stay here and keep your eyes open."
35 And he went forward a little, and fell on the ground, and prayed that, if it were possible, the hour might pass from him. He wandered away a little, and fell to the ground. He prayed that if there were any possible way he wouldn't have to go through this time.
36 And he said, Abba, Father, all things are possible unto thee; take away this cup from me: nevertheless not what I will, but what thou wilt. He said, "Oh Father, anything is possible for you. I don't want to have to drink this cup. Take it away. But anyway, let it be what you want, not what I want."
37 And he cometh, and findeth them sleeping, and saith unto Peter, Simon, sleepest thou? couldest not thou watch one hour? When he came back and found his disciples sleeping, he said to Peter, "Simon are you sleeping? Couldn't you keep your eyes open for an hour?
38 Watch ye and pray, lest ye enter into temptation. The spirit truly is ready, but the flesh is weak. Keep them open and pray, or else you might fall for temptation. The spirit is willing, but the body is weak."
39 And again he went away, and prayed, and spake the same words. Again, he went away and prayed, and he said the same thing again.
40 And when he returned, he found them asleep again, (for their eyes were heavy,) neither wist they what to answer him. When he got back, he found them asleep again (they were really tired), and they had no idea how to answer him.
41 And he cometh the third time, and saith unto them, Sleep on now, and take your rest: it is enough, the hour is come; behold, the Son of man is betrayed into the hands of sinners. The third time he came back, he told them, "Just sleep now, it's enough. The time has come for the Son of man to be betrayed into the hands of sinners.
42 Rise up, let us go; lo, he that betrayeth me is at hand. Get up, let's go. Look, the betrayer is here."
43 And immediately, while he yet spake, cometh Judas, one of the twelve, and with him a great multitude with swords and staves, from the chief priests and the scribes and the elders. And just as he was saying that, Judas came in, along with a lot of armed people, from the chief priests, scribes, and elders.
44 And he that betrayed him had given them a token, saying, Whomsoever I shall kiss, that same is he; take him, and lead him away safely. The betrayer had made an arrangement with them: "I'm going to kiss this guy; that's the one you want. Take him and get him out of there."
45 And as soon as he was come, he goeth straightway to him, and saith, Master, master; and kissed him. And sure enough, as soon as he was there, he went directly to Jesus, saying "Hi Master!" and kissed him.
46 And they laid their hands on him, and took him. And the armed people grabbed Jesus and took him away.
47 And one of them that stood by drew a sword, and smote a servant of the high priest, and cut off his ear. But Peter, who was standing by, pulled his sword out and struck the high priest's servant, cutting off his ear.
48 And Jesus answered and said unto them, Are ye come out, as against a thief, with swords and with staves to take me? As for Jesus, he said, "Are you coming to get me with your swords and sticks, like I'm some kind of thief?
49 I was daily with you in the temple teaching, and ye took me not: but the scriptures must be fulfilled. I was right there with you teaching in the temple every single day, and you never came for me then. Oh well, the scriptures will have to be fulfilled."
50 And they all forsook him, and fled. Then everybody gave up on him and took off.
51 And there followed him a certain young man, having a linen cloth cast about his naked body; and the young men laid hold on him: But I was there following him, with a linen sheet wrapped around my naked body, when I was grabbed by the young men.
52 And he left the linen cloth, and fled from them naked. I ran away naked, leaving the sheet with them.
53 And they led Jesus away to the high priest: and with him were assembled all the chief priests and the elders and the scribes. Then the armed men took Jesus to the high priest, and all the chief priests, elders, and scribes were assembled there.
54 And Peter followed him afar off, even into the palace of the high priest: and he sat with the servants, and warmed himself at the fire. Peter followed from a distance, all the way into the high priest's palace, and he sat down at the fire with the servants and made himself comfortable.
55 And the chief priests and all the council sought for witness against Jesus to put him to death; and found none. The chief priests and the rest of the council asked for testimony against Jesus so they could put him to death, but there wasn't any such testimony to be found.
56 For many bare false witness against him, but their witness agreed not together. That is to say, there was testimony against him, but it was false testimony, and the witnesses contradicted each other.
57 And there arose certain, and bare false witness against him, saying, The deceitful witnesses said,
58 We heard him say, I will destroy this temple that is made with hands, and within three days I will build another made without hands. "We heard him say, 'I will destroy this handmade temple, and within three days I will build another without using my hands."
59 But neither so did their witness agree together. But anyway, those witnesses couldn't get their story straight.
60 And the high priest stood up in the midst, and asked Jesus, saying, Answerest thou nothing? what is it which these witness against thee? The high priest stood up and asked Jesus, "Don't you have anything to say? Just what are they saying about you?"
61 But he held his peace, and answered nothing. Again the high priest asked him, and said unto him, Art thou the Christ, the Son of the Blessed? Jesus kept his mouth shut. The high priest started interrogating him again: "Are you the Christ, the son of the blessed?"
62 And Jesus said, I am: and ye shall see the Son of man sitting on the right hand of power, and coming in the clouds of heaven. Jesus answered this one, saying "Yes I am, and you all are going to see the son of man sitting at the right hand side of power and coming in the clouds of heaven."
63 Then the high priest rent his clothes, and saith, What need we any further witnesses? The high priest ripped his shirt off, saying "Witnesses? We don't need any more witnesses!
64 Ye have heard the blasphemy: what think ye? And they all condemned him to be guilty of death. You all heard that blasphemy, now what do you think about that?" And they all condemned him to death.
65 And some began to spit on him, and to cover his face, and to buffet him, and to say unto him, Prophesy: and the servants did strike him with the palms of their hands. Some of them spat on him. They put a bag over his head and punched him. They taunted him, "So tell us the future, prophet!", and the servants slapped him.
66 And as Peter was beneath in the palace, there cometh one of the maids of the high priest: Meanwhile, Peter was down in the palace, when one of the high priest's maids came by.
67 And when she saw Peter warming himself, she looked upon him, and said, And thou also wast with Jesus of Nazareth. And when she saw Peter warming himself, she looked at him and said, "Hey, you were with that Jesus of Nazareth, weren't you?"
68 But he denied, saying, I know not, neither understand I what thou sayest. And he went out into the porch; and the cock crew. He denied it, saying, "I don't have any idea what you're talking about." And as he went out to the porch, the rooster crowed.
69 And a maid saw him again, and began to say to them that stood by, This is one of them. And another maid saw him, and said to the bystanders, "This is one of them."
70 And he denied it again. And a little after, they that stood by said again to Peter, Surely thou art one of them: for thou art a Galilaean, and thy speech agreeth thereto.
71 But he began to curse and to swear, saying, I know not this man of whom ye speak.
72 And the second time the cock crew. And Peter called to mind the word that Jesus said unto him, Before the cock crow twice, thou shalt deny me thrice. And when he thought thereon, he wept.

Chapter 15

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And straightway in the morning the chief priests held a consultation with the elders and scribes and the whole council, and bound Jesus, and carried him away, and delivered him to Pilate.
2 And Pilate asked him, Art thou the King of the Jews? And he answering said unto him, Thou sayest it.
3 And the chief priests accused him of many things: but he answered nothing.
4 And Pilate asked him again, saying, Answerest thou nothing? behold how many things they witness against thee.
5 But Jesus yet answered nothing; so that Pilate marvelled.
6 Now at that feast he released unto them one prisoner, whomsoever they desired.
7 And there was one named Barabbas, which lay bound with them that had made insurrection with him, who had committed murder in the insurrection.
8 And the multitude crying aloud began to desire him to do as he had ever done unto them.
9 But Pilate answered them, saying, Will ye that I release unto you the King of the Jews?
10 For he knew that the chief priests had delivered him for envy.
11 But the chief priests moved the people, that he should rather release Barabbas unto them.
12 And Pilate answered and said again unto them, What will ye then that I shall do unto him whom ye call the King of the Jews?
13 And they cried out again, Crucify him.
14 Then Pilate said unto them, Why, what evil hath he done? And they cried out the more exceedingly, Crucify him. say ye to the goodman of the house, The Master saith, Where is the guestchamber, where I shall eat the passover with my disciples?
15 And so Pilate, willing to content the people, released Barabbas unto them, and delivered Jesus, when he had scourged him, to be crucified.
16 And the soldiers led him away into the hall, called Praetorium; and they call together the whole band.
17 And they clothed him with purple, and platted a crown of thorns, and put it about his head,
18 And began to salute him, Hail, King of the Jews!
19 And they smote him on the head with a reed, and did spit upon him, and bowing their knees worshipped him.
20 And when they had mocked him, they took off the purple from him, and put his own clothes on him, and led him out to crucify him.
21 And they compel one Simon a Cyrenian, who passed by, coming out of the country, the father of Alexander and Rufus, to bear his cross.
22 And they bring him unto the place Golgotha, which is, being interpreted, The place of a skull.
23 And they gave him to drink wine mingled with myrrh: but he received it not.
24 And when they had crucified him, they parted his garments, casting lots upon them, what every man should take.
25 And it was the third hour, and they crucified him.
26 And the superscription of his accusation was written over, THE KING OF THE JEWS.
27 And with him they crucify two thieves; the one on his right hand, and the other on his left.
28 And the scripture was fulfilled, which saith, And he was numbered with the transgressors.
29 And they that passed by railed on him, wagging their heads, and saying, Ah, thou that destroyest the temple, and buildest it in three days,
30 Save thyself, and come down from the cross.
31 Likewise also the chief priests mocking said among themselves with the scribes, He saved others; himself he cannot save.
32 Let Christ the King of Israel descend now from the cross, that we may see and believe. And they that were crucified with him reviled him.
33 And when the sixth hour was come, there was darkness over the whole land until the ninth hour.
34 And at the ninth hour Jesus cried with a loud voice, saying, Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani? which is, being interpreted, My God, my God, why hast thou forsaken me?
35 And some of them that stood by, when they heard it, said, Behold, he calleth Elias.
36 And one ran and filled a spunge full of vinegar, and put it on a reed, and gave him to drink, saying, Let alone; let us see whether Elias will come to take him down.
37 And Jesus cried with a loud voice, and gave up the ghost.
38 And the veil of the temple was rent in twain from the top to the bottom.
39 And when the centurion, which stood over against him, saw that he so cried out, and gave up the ghost, he said, Truly this man was the Son of God.
40 There were also women looking on afar off: among whom was Mary Magdalene, and Mary the mother of James the less and of Joses, and Salome;
41 (Who also, when he was in Galilee, followed him, and ministered unto him;) and many other women which came up with him unto Jerusalem.
42 And now when the even was come, because it was the preparation, that is, the day before the sabbath,
43 Joseph of Arimathaea, and honourable counseller, which also waited for the kingdom of God, came, and went in boldly unto Pilate, and craved the body of Jesus.
44 And Pilate marvelled if he were already dead: and calling unto him the centurion, he asked him whether he had been any while dead.
45 And when he knew it of the centurion, he gave the body to Joseph.
46 And he bought fine linen, and took him down, and wrapped him in the linen, and laid him in a sepulchre which was hewn out of a rock, and rolled a stone unto the door of the sepulchre.
47 And Mary Magdalene and Mary the mother of Joses beheld where he was laid.

Chapter 16

Verse King James Version Proposed Conservative Translation Analysis
1 And when the sabbath was past, Mary Magdalene, and Mary the mother of James, and Salome, had bought sweet spices, that they might come and anoint him.
2 And very early in the morning the first day of the week, they came unto the sepulchre at the rising of the sun.
3 And they said among themselves, Who shall roll us away the stone from the door of the sepulchre?
4 And when they looked, they saw that the stone was rolled away: for it was very great. But when the women looked, they saw that the massive stone had been rolled to the side. why not use the pronoun "women" here?
5 And entering into the sepulchre, they saw a young man sitting on the right side, clothed in a long white garment; and they were affrighted.
6 And he saith unto them, Be not affrighted: Ye seek Jesus of Nazareth, which was crucified: he is risen; he is not here: behold the place where they laid him.
7 But go your way, tell his disciples and Peter that he goeth before you into Galilee: there shall ye see him, as he said unto you.
8 And they went out quickly, and fled from the sepulchre; for they trembled and were amazed: neither said they any thing to any man; for they were afraid.
9 Now when Jesus was risen early the first day of the week, he appeared first to Mary Magdalene, out of whom he had cast seven devils. The verses from here on are not in the oldest manuscripts, and are not likely to be authentic.[7]
10 And she went and told them that had been with him, as they mourned and wept.
11 And they, when they had heard that he was alive, and had been seen of her, believed not.
12 After that he appeared in another form unto two of them, as they walked, and went into the country.
13 And they went and told it unto the residue: neither believed they them.
14 Afterward he appeared unto the eleven as they sat at meat, and upbraided them with their unbelief and hardness of heart, because they believed not them which had seen him after he was risen.
15 And he said unto them, Go ye into all the world, and preach the gospel to every creature.
16 He that believeth and is baptized shall be saved; but he that believeth not shall be damned.
17 And these signs shall follow them that believe; In my name shall they cast out devils; they shall speak with new tongues;
18 They shall take up serpents; and if they drink any deadly thing, it shall not hurt them; they shall lay hands on the sick, and they shall recover.
19 So then after the Lord had spoken unto them, he was received up into heaven, and sat on the right hand of God.
20 And they went forth, and preached everywhere, the Lord working with them, and confirming the word with signs following. Amen.


  1. 1 Peter 5:13
  2. Mark 14:51-52 (New Revised Standard Version).
  3. http://catholic-resources.org/Bible/NT-Statistics-Greek.htm
  4. See talk page.
  5. Other possible translations are "floozy" or "bimbo".
  6. http://chestofbooks.com/reference/Facts-For-Everybody/Roman-Division-Of-Time.html
  7. http://www.bible-researcher.com/endmark.html