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I'm not sure the tone of the article is appropriate. While I agree, and it is obvious, that the bill does not beg racial profiling, asking "liberals" to read the article in the article ("Liberals, read the new law for yourselves once and for all, please.") and then later posing questions to them makes this work seem like a pseudo-homework assignment as opposed to an encyclopedia article--<small>[[User:Iduan|<span style="color: #FFCCCC; background: #660000">I]][[User_talk:Iduan|<span style="color:#CCCCFF; background:#000033">Duan]]</span></span></small> 15:24, 8 June 2010 (EDT)
:Yeah, I feel like the patronizing tone of the article is more counter-productive than anything, encouraging liberals to reaffirm their beliefs rather than take a second look.[[User:Fasdfad|Fasdfad]] 07:48, 19 August 2011 (EDT)
