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:*''Correct'': '''Someone''' parked a car in the "no-parking zone" simply because '''he''' was too lazy to walk from a legitimate parking space. ''If female:'' '''Someone''' parked a car in the "no-parking zone" simply because '''she''' was too lazy to walk from a legitimate parking space.

:*''Correct'': '''Someone''' parked a car in the "no-parking zone" simply because '''he''' was too lazy to walk from a legitimate parking space. ''If female:'' '''Someone''' parked a car in the "no-parking zone" simply because '''she''' was too lazy to walk from a legitimate parking space.

*[[comma splice]]--connecting two [[independent clause]]s with a comma and no [[semicolon]] or [[coordinating conjunction]]:

*[[comma splice]]—connecting two [[independent clause]]s with a comma and no [[semicolon]] or [[coordinating conjunction]]:

:*''Incorrect'':  [[Liberal]]s are [[deceit]]ful, conservatives are trustworthy.

:*''Incorrect'':  [[Liberal]]s are [[deceit]]ful, conservatives are trustworthy.

:*''Correct'':  Liberals are deceitful; conservatives are trustworthy.

:*''Correct'':  Liberals are deceitful; conservatives are trustworthy.

*unclear comparison:

*unclear comparison:

:*''Incorrect'': God loves Christians more than non-Christians.  (This is not clear whether it means "more than non-Christians do" or the correct meaning, below)

:*''Incorrect'': God loves Christians more than non-Christians.  (This is not clear whether it means "more than non-Christians do" or the meaning below)

:*''Correct'': God loves Christians more than He does non-Christians.

:*''Correct'': God loves Christians more than He does non-Christians.

[[Category:Grammar]]

[[Category:Grammar]]

[[Category:Homeschool Curriculum]]

[[Category:Homeschool Curriculum]]