Difference between revisions of "Talk:North Korea"
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Revision as of 03:01, July 7, 2007
Rhetoric is verging on silly - or already there. This is a serious article about people in serious trouble:
- styles itself ...
- megalomaniacal dictator
- criticized by people of all political stripes ...
- difficulties with food shortages
First two are overblown rhetoric.
Next one is an exaggeration; liberals hardly ever criticize the NK government.
Last one is an understatement.
Please rewrite the intro with a more serious tone. Save breezy for record album reviews. --Ed Poor Talk 23:01, 6 July 2007 (EDT)