Difference between revisions of "Talk:North Korea"

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(Please rewrite the intro)
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Revision as of 03:01, July 7, 2007

Rhetoric is verging on silly - or already there. This is a serious article about people in serious trouble:

styles itself ...
megalomaniacal dictator
criticized by people of all political stripes ...
difficulties with food shortages

First two are overblown rhetoric.

Next one is an exaggeration; liberals hardly ever criticize the NK government.

Last one is an understatement.

Please rewrite the intro with a more serious tone. Save breezy for record album reviews. --Ed Poor Talk 23:01, 6 July 2007 (EDT)