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Why was the information about electrons making up atoms removed?  Also, I believe it would be a positive move if the article can be worded in a way that lay people can understand and follow what is being said. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 04:12, 2 September 2007 (EDT)
 
Why was the information about electrons making up atoms removed?  Also, I believe it would be a positive move if the article can be worded in a way that lay people can understand and follow what is being said. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 04:12, 2 September 2007 (EDT)
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:The information wasn't removed, but the first sentence was kinda wordy and redundant.  "Fundamental particle" already implies that they make up atoms, and "fundamental subatomic particle" is more specific.  I agree it's a little technical right now, I'll try to work on that in a bit.[[User:Fantasia|Fantasia]] 11:50, 2 September 2007 (EDT)
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