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:: It is [[placement bias]] to move that description to later, and dilute the first sentence.  Placement bias is rampant at Wikipedia, but not here.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 14:05, 18 February 2008 (EST)

:: It is [[placement bias]] to move that description to later, and dilute the first sentence.  Placement bias is rampant at Wikipedia, but not here.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 14:05, 18 February 2008 (EST)

:::Andy just to let you know I did delete the "sin" in the first sentence - but only because it was repeated in the second sentence (so the article had read "Suicide is the crime or sin of killing of oneself. This is a sin ..." - which is obviously redundant). However, Humblpi - I agree with Andy that you deleting both "crime" and "sin" was placement bias--<small>[[User:Iduan|<span style="color: #FFCCCC; background: #660000">I]][[User_talk:Iduan|<span style="color:#CCCCFF; background:#000033">Duan]]</span></span></small> 14:13, 18 February 2008 (EST)

:::Andy just to let you know I did delete the "sin" in the first sentence - but only because it was repeated in the second sentence (so the article had read "Suicide is the crime or sin of killing of oneself. This is a sin ..." - which is obviously redundant). However, Humblpi - I agree with Andy that you deleting both "crime" and "sin" was placement bias--<small>[[User:Iduan|<span style="color: #FFCCCC; background: #660000">I]][[User_talk:Iduan|<span style="color:#CCCCFF; background:#000033">Duan]]</span></span></small> 14:13, 18 February 2008 (EST)