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Obama has not even visited continental Europe as an official, and his only contact with the [[United Kingdom]] was when he joined Sen. Lugar in meeting with Prime Minister Tony Blair.<ref>http://obama.senate.gov/press/050823-obama_to_visit</ref>
 
Obama has not even visited continental Europe as an official, and his only contact with the [[United Kingdom]] was when he joined Sen. Lugar in meeting with Prime Minister Tony Blair.<ref>http://obama.senate.gov/press/050823-obama_to_visit</ref>
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Russia and former Soviet republics:  Met with representatives of the International Republican Institute and National Democratic Institute to discuss democracy in the former Soviet republics. Also met with Russian military officials and visited numerous nuclear/biological weapons destruction sites in Russia, Ukraine and Azerbaijan with Senate Foreign Relations Committee Chairman Richard Lugar (R-IN).  
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In Russia and the former Soviet republics, he met with representatives of the International Republican Institute and National Democratic Institute to discuss democracy in the former Soviet republics. He also met with Russian military officials and visited numerous nuclear/biological weapons destruction sites in Russia, Ukraine and Azerbaijan with Senate Foreign Relations Committee Chairman Richard Lugar (R-IN).  
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Visited South Africa, Kenya, Ethiopia, Djibouti and Chad:  Discussed his tour of Robben Island prison, met with U.S. troops, visited refugee camps of the people fleeing Darfur and addressed Africa's growing AIDS epidemic. <ref>http://obama.senate.gov/podcast/060906-090606_africa_t/</ref>  
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Obama visited South Africa, Kenya, Ethiopia, Djibouti and Chad; he discussed his tour of Robben Island prison, met with U.S. troops, and visited refugee camps of the people fleeing Darfur and addressed Africa's growing AIDS epidemic. <ref>http://obama.senate.gov/podcast/060906-090606_africa_t/</ref>  
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Ten day tour of the Middle East:  Talked with government leaders in Qatar, Kuwait, Iraq, Jordan and Israel.  <ref> http://obama.senate.gov/news/060113-obama_wraps_up/</ref>
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During a ten day tour of the Middle East, he talked with government leaders in Qatar, Kuwait, Iraq, Jordan and Israel.  <ref> http://obama.senate.gov/news/060113-obama_wraps_up/</ref>
       
== Accomplishments while serving on the Senate Foreign Relations Committee ==
 
== Accomplishments while serving on the Senate Foreign Relations Committee ==
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February 2008, approved Obama's proposal on a new strategy to reduce poverty throughout the world.
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In February 2008, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee approved Obama's proposal on a new strategy to reduce poverty throughout the world.
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Worked with Sen. Lugar writing legislation aimed at improving conventional and nuclear non-proliferation efforts.  Legislation was signed by Pres. Bush in January 2008.
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June 2007 the Senate passed his resolution condemning violence by the Zimbabwe government.
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In June 2007, the Senate passed legislation co-sponsored by Obama that financed a Special Court for Sierra Leone to prosecute former Liberian President Charles Taylor. <ref> http://www.boston.com/news/nation/articles/2008/02/26/obamas_senate_foreign_relations_work/ </ref>
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Obama worked with Sen. Lugar writing legislation aimed at improving conventional and nuclear non-proliferation efforts.  This legislation was signed by [[George W. Bush|President Bush]] in January 2008.
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In June 2007 the Senate passed his resolution condemning violence by the Zimbabwe government. It also passed legislation co-sponsored by Obama that financed a Special Court for Sierra Leone to prosecute former Liberian President Charles Taylor. <ref> http://www.boston.com/news/nation/articles/2008/02/26/obamas_senate_foreign_relations_work/ </ref>
    
==Faith and Values==
 
==Faith and Values==
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