Difference between revisions of "Talk:Sweden"
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== Too much opinion and editorializing == | == Too much opinion and editorializing == | ||
| − | I agree that this article is poorly written, but it appears to contain grammatical and syntactical errors related to English not | + | I agree that this article is poorly written, but it appears to contain grammatical and syntactical errors related to English not being the writer's native language. |
If this site is going to be taken seriously, it cannot show such obvious bias, opinion and editorializing. If the articles just stick to facts, the people who use this site can draw their own conclusions. This article can discuss the state of religion and the general position of Swedes on social issues without commenting that these things are somehow "bad." The conservative reader can draw this conclusion on his or her own without being told this is how he or she is supposed to think. | If this site is going to be taken seriously, it cannot show such obvious bias, opinion and editorializing. If the articles just stick to facts, the people who use this site can draw their own conclusions. This article can discuss the state of religion and the general position of Swedes on social issues without commenting that these things are somehow "bad." The conservative reader can draw this conclusion on his or her own without being told this is how he or she is supposed to think. | ||
--[[User:Vonratt|Vonratt]] 16:09, 19 March 2007 (EDT) | --[[User:Vonratt|Vonratt]] 16:09, 19 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
Revision as of 23:56, March 21, 2007
Why did you erase the information from MissisppiMud?
'Sweden is highly socialistic, and poorer than Mississippi. The suicide rate is extremely high. The citizens of Sweden must pay most of their income to the government.'
I think they are worth knowing.--Sherman 09:05, 14 March 2007 (EDT)
No references to the poorer than Mississippi part. I don't think it's true. The same goes for the part about the suicide rate. Even though Sweden is far mote socialistic than the US there has been a change of direction in Swedish politics lately to a more rightwing government. /What
Suicide rates per 100 000 by country, year and sex Year Male Female 01 18.9 8.1 (Sweden) 01 17.6 4.1 (US)
According to the WHO
Yuck
This article looks like it was written by a semi-literate child copying from a pamphlet. It could use a very thorough re-write from an expert. Palmd001 20:12, 18 March 2007 (EDT)
Too much opinion and editorializing
I agree that this article is poorly written, but it appears to contain grammatical and syntactical errors related to English not being the writer's native language.
If this site is going to be taken seriously, it cannot show such obvious bias, opinion and editorializing. If the articles just stick to facts, the people who use this site can draw their own conclusions. This article can discuss the state of religion and the general position of Swedes on social issues without commenting that these things are somehow "bad." The conservative reader can draw this conclusion on his or her own without being told this is how he or she is supposed to think. --Vonratt 16:09, 19 March 2007 (EDT)