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"Blood letting," of course now referred to as phlebotomy, is still used as treatment for different anomalies, including aplastic anemia and hemachromatosis. [[User:JLauttamus|Jeffrey W. Lauttamus]][[User_talk:JLauttamus|<sub>Discussion</sub>]] 11:08, 12 January 2009 (EST) | "Blood letting," of course now referred to as phlebotomy, is still used as treatment for different anomalies, including aplastic anemia and hemachromatosis. [[User:JLauttamus|Jeffrey W. Lauttamus]][[User_talk:JLauttamus|<sub>Discussion</sub>]] 11:08, 12 January 2009 (EST) | ||
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| + | First off, I didn't inject "overzealous virus hunters." That was in there. I merely re-worded the last sentence of the first paragraph to make it sound better. Second, the disease did not occur '''every time''' doctors prescribed clorquinol. Clorquinol is only neurotoxic in high doses. Third, this is a collaborative project and I was merely trying to make the last sentence read better. It is currently very choppy. I don't see how that is inserting a "liberal" tone into this article. Read my contributions and you will see that I am anything but a liberal editor here, please. [[User:JLauttamus|Jeffrey W. Lauttamus]][[User_talk:JLauttamus|<sub>Discussion</sub>]] 11:28, 12 January 2009 (EST) | ||
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"Blood letting," of course now referred to as phlebotomy, is still used as treatment for different anomalies, including aplastic anemia and hemachromatosis. Jeffrey W. LauttamusDiscussion 11:08, 12 January 2009 (EST)
Misleading
First off, I didn't inject "overzealous virus hunters." That was in there. I merely re-worded the last sentence of the first paragraph to make it sound better. Second, the disease did not occur every time doctors prescribed clorquinol. Clorquinol is only neurotoxic in high doses. Third, this is a collaborative project and I was merely trying to make the last sentence read better. It is currently very choppy. I don't see how that is inserting a "liberal" tone into this article. Read my contributions and you will see that I am anything but a liberal editor here, please. Jeffrey W. LauttamusDiscussion 11:28, 12 January 2009 (EST)