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First of all, if my tone sounded as though i was demanding something from you or seemed disrespectful in some way I apologize, that was not my intent. I am merely requesting that the article changes it's tone. It states: "Obama was caught..." we do not know for certain that Obama was behind the video at all. Are we as Americans not considered innocent until proven guilty?
 
First of all, if my tone sounded as though i was demanding something from you or seemed disrespectful in some way I apologize, that was not my intent. I am merely requesting that the article changes it's tone. It states: "Obama was caught..." we do not know for certain that Obama was behind the video at all. Are we as Americans not considered innocent until proven guilty?
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And what about the charges of sexism? The article calls the video a "sexist" smear. Will someone please tell me what was sexist about it?
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And what about the charges of sexism? The article calls the video a "sexist" smear. Will someone please tell me what was sexist about it? [[User:FairMan|FairMan]] 23:02, 4 February 2009 (EST)
    
:Looking at the references, it is a documented fact that this video was made professionally; it is not an amateur attempt at all.  It's also documented that Winner & Associates (including Ethan Winner) are die-hard Obama supporters who have given much to the campaign.  While it is not proven from these pages that Obama supported such a video, it is also not proven that he didn't help out the creation of it in some way.  I added Ethan Winner's ''alleged'' claim that he made the video alone.  [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 22:17, 4 February 2009 (EST)
 
:Looking at the references, it is a documented fact that this video was made professionally; it is not an amateur attempt at all.  It's also documented that Winner & Associates (including Ethan Winner) are die-hard Obama supporters who have given much to the campaign.  While it is not proven from these pages that Obama supported such a video, it is also not proven that he didn't help out the creation of it in some way.  I added Ethan Winner's ''alleged'' claim that he made the video alone.  [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] 22:17, 4 February 2009 (EST)
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Well that is a start, thank you. I honestly didn't think I'd get anyone to change anything in the article. But there are still those sexism charges. Can you provide some explanation to those? The line reads: "Obama was caught for his quiet hiring of Winner & Associates to disseminate a sexist smear video against her." Do you think you might be able to take out that word sexist? And maybe reword it in a way that doesn't immediately imply that Obama is behind the video (Until damning evidence is brought forth)? And there is also the claim at the beginning stating: "Obama mocks Sen. McCain's for his age and Gov. Palin for being a woman and outsider." The only evidence supposedly supporting the claim that Obama mocked Palin for being "a woman and outsider" is this smear video. Am I just missing something here? How is Obama mocking her for being a woman in this video? How is the video itself at all sexist? [[User:FairMan|FairMan]] 23:02, 4 February 2009 (EST)
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