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OK, I think included everything that was relevant from the original article and kept the list of 'things that are cool about whales'. I've included a section on the evolution of whales that can be expanded by anyone that wants to include the cool fossils and such like or break down the systematics of whales and dolphins
OK, I think included everything that was relevant from the original article and kept the list of 'things that are cool about whales'. I've included a section on the evolution of whales that can be expanded by anyone that wants to include the cool fossils and such like or break down the systematics of whales and dolphins
--[[User:Igor nz|Igor nz]] 02:06, 21 March 2007 (EDT)
--[[User:Igor nz|Igor nz]] 02:06, 21 March 2007 (EDT)
== Child-like ==
This whole article still sounds like it was written by a very young person. It reads very unprofessional. Perhaps a biologist here could clean it up?[[User:Palmd001|Palmd001]] 20:52, 25 March 2007 (EDT)