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| + | The first two sentances are VERY patronizing. | ||
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| + | 'Some guns fire small bullets. Some guns fire big bullets. Some guns fire very big bullets' | ||
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| + | Is this aimed at 5 year olds?! This could be a very good article with a little work. [[User:Jennisuk|Jennisuk]] 22:08, 28 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
Revision as of 02:08, March 29, 2007
Most of the first section seemed rather patronizing
Patronizing
The first two sentances are VERY patronizing.
'Some guns fire small bullets. Some guns fire big bullets. Some guns fire very big bullets'
Is this aimed at 5 year olds?! This could be a very good article with a little work. Jennisuk 22:08, 28 March 2007 (EDT)