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Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something a high school student would respect as a reference.

Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --Mtur 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

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	Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something a high school student would respect as a reference.		Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something a high school student would respect as a reference.
		+	: Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --[[User:Mtur\|Mtur]] 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)