Difference between revisions of "Talk:Haiku"

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Good start~~, for a schoolboy~~. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --Ed Poor 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --Mtur 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

Revision as of 19:57, March 29, 2007 (view source) Mtur (talk \| contribs) (mangled form) ← Older edit		Revision as of 20:00, March 29, 2007 (view source) Ed Poor (talk \| contribs) (I don't even like my OWN remarks sometimes. This one seems harsh in retrospect) Newer edit →
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−	Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something ~~a high school student would~~ respect as a reference.	+	Good start<s>, for a schoolboy</s>. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --[[User:Ed Poor\|Ed Poor]] 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
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	: Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --[[User:Mtur\|Mtur]] 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)		: Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --[[User:Mtur\|Mtur]] 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)