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| + | : You lack the three distinct concepts, the seasonal word, and the general theme of nature. --[[User:Mtur|Mtur]] 23:41, 29 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
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Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --Ed Poor 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
- Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --Mtur 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
George W. Bush/ Consevapedia says/ Liberals hate us. Sevenstring 23:35, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
- You lack the three distinct concepts, the seasonal word, and the general theme of nature. --Mtur 23:41, 29 March 2007 (EDT)