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→‎Chapter 13: translated last two verses to complete Chapter 13!
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|O Jerusalem, Jerusalem, which killest the prophets, and stonest them that are sent unto thee; how often would I have gathered thy children together, as a hen doth gather her brood under her wings, and ye would not!
 
|O Jerusalem, Jerusalem, which killest the prophets, and stonest them that are sent unto thee; how often would I have gathered thy children together, as a hen doth gather her brood under her wings, and ye would not!
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|Oh Jerusalem, Jerusalem, you killed the prophets and stoned those we sent to you; how often would I gather your people together, as a hen gathers her flock under her wings, yet you would not allow it!
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|OK to insert "We" for clarity, rather than use the now-disfavored passive voice?  "People" of the city is a more precise translation than "children" for τέκνον
 
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|Behold, your house is left unto you desolate: and verily I say unto you, Ye shall not see me, until the time come when ye shall say, Blessed is he that cometh in the name of the Lord.
 
|Behold, your house is left unto you desolate: and verily I say unto you, Ye shall not see me, until the time come when ye shall say, Blessed is he that cometh in the name of the Lord.
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|Listen up: your house has an emptiness for you.  Truly I tell you, "You shall not see me until you shall admit, 'Blessed is he who comes in the name of the Lord!'"
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|"admit" is a big legalistic, but is the best alternative; "emptiness" could be improved
 
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