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Some paragraphs have been missed in your edits. Could you please reinstall them or support your deletes?  --[[User:Joaquín Martínez|Joaquín Martínez]] 19:45, 2 July 2010 (EDT)
 
Some paragraphs have been missed in your edits. Could you please reinstall them or support your deletes?  --[[User:Joaquín Martínez|Joaquín Martínez]] 19:45, 2 July 2010 (EDT)
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Hi. The Calvinism paragraph seemed overly long in a long article, and it repeated some material already found on the page. But that was the only issue with me there. My changes mainly went to to either correcting grammar and making for easier reading OR replacing language that could be considered somewhat slanted with more neutral or balanced wording. I have read the guidelines and try to abibe by them all. Wycliffe.
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