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| − | I'm not sure of the proper ediquette for editing articles on this site, so i'll wait for a response before i edit it again, as it got reverted last time. In the opening paragraph it says "It defends traditional marriage by enabling...". This is a biased statement. The article should explain what the act does, and let the reader decide whether or not it actually defends traditional marriage. I suggest that it be changed to "It enables...". I apologize for changing it without asking before, i'm new here and dont really know how things work. | + | I'm not sure of the proper ediquette for editing articles on this site, so i'll wait for a response before i edit it again, as it got reverted last time. In the opening paragraph it says "It defends traditional marriage by enabling...". This is a biased statement. The article should explain what the act does, and let the reader decide whether or not it actually defends traditional marriage. I suggest that it be changed to "It enables...". I apologize for changing it without asking before, i'm new here and dont really know how things work.--[[User:Jasonb242|Jasonb242]] 00:06, 18 June 2011 (EDT) |
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I'm not sure of the proper ediquette for editing articles on this site, so i'll wait for a response before i edit it again, as it got reverted last time. In the opening paragraph it says "It defends traditional marriage by enabling...". This is a biased statement. The article should explain what the act does, and let the reader decide whether or not it actually defends traditional marriage. I suggest that it be changed to "It enables...". I apologize for changing it without asking before, i'm new here and dont really know how things work.--Jasonb242 00:06, 18 June 2011 (EDT)