:9.5 on substance, but 9 on technical correctness (several misspelled words, and needs some paragraph breaks). See bracketed comments above.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 20:46, 6 February 2012 (EST) | :9.5 on substance, but 9 on technical correctness (several misspelled words, and needs some paragraph breaks). See bracketed comments above.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 20:46, 6 February 2012 (EST) |