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Good essay, but not spectacular. I think more could have been made of the trip and tournament in an essay about it. Try to be more colorful in your writing. Substance: 9.5/10. Technical: 9.4/10.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 20:34, 28 March 2012 (EDT)
Good essay, but not spectacular. I think more could have been made of the trip and tournament in an essay about it. Try to be more colorful in your writing. Substance: 9.5/10. Technical: 9.4/10.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 20:34, 28 March 2012 (EDT)
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