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:Your essay has much good substance in it, but areas for improvement as noted above.  Substance: 9.7.  Technical: 9.3.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 14:26, 26 February 2012 (EST)
 
:Your essay has much good substance in it, but areas for improvement as noted above.  Substance: 9.7.  Technical: 9.3.--[[User:Aschlafly|Andy Schlafly]] 14:26, 26 February 2012 (EST)
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