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| − | Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something | + | Good start<s>, for a schoolboy</s>. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT) |
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| + | : Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --[[User:Mtur|Mtur]] 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | [[User:Sevenstring|Sevenstring]] 23:35, 29 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
| + | : You lack the three distinct concepts, the seasonal word, and the general theme of nature. --[[User:Mtur|Mtur]] 23:41, 29 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | At least I have a sense of humour. Lighten up. [[User:Sevenstring|Sevenstring]] 23:43, 29 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | : You are instead looking for a ''senryu'' which is instead concerned with human foibles. --[[User:Mtur|Mtur]] 23:50, 29 March 2007 (EDT) | ||
Latest revision as of 03:50, March 30, 2007
Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --Ed Poor 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
- Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --Mtur 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
George W. Bush/ Consevapedia says/ Liberals hate us. Sevenstring 23:35, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
- You lack the three distinct concepts, the seasonal word, and the general theme of nature. --Mtur 23:41, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
At least I have a sense of humour. Lighten up. Sevenstring 23:43, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
- You are instead looking for a senryu which is instead concerned with human foibles. --Mtur 23:50, 29 March 2007 (EDT)