Difference between revisions of "Talk:Haiku"

Latest revision as of 03:50, March 30, 2007

Good start~~, for a schoolboy~~. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --Ed Poor 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

Bah. I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form. There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --Mtur 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

George W. Bush/ Consevapedia says/ Liberals hate us. Sevenstring 23:35, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

You lack the three distinct concepts, the seasonal word, and the general theme of nature. --Mtur 23:41, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

At least I have a sense of humour. Lighten up. Sevenstring 23:43, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

You are instead looking for a senryu which is instead concerned with human foibles. --Mtur 23:50, 29 March 2007 (EDT)

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-Good start, for a schoolboy. Now, try to make something a high school student would respect as a reference.
+Good start<s>, for a schoolboy</s>. Now, try to make something students could respect as a reference. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] 16:00, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
 : Bah.  I hate seeing people mangling the haiku form.  There is much more to it than 5 7 5. --[[User:Mtur|Mtur]] 15:57, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
+George W. Bush/
+Consevapedia says/
+Liberals hate us.
+[[User:Sevenstring|Sevenstring]] 23:35, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
+: You lack the three distinct concepts, the seasonal word, and the general theme of nature.  --[[User:Mtur|Mtur]] 23:41, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
+At least I have a sense of humour. Lighten up. [[User:Sevenstring|Sevenstring]] 23:43, 29 March 2007 (EDT)
+: You are instead looking for a ''senryu'' which is instead concerned with human foibles. --[[User:Mtur|Mtur]] 23:50, 29 March 2007 (EDT)