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Here's another source,  
 
Here's another source,  
 
[http://www.pogledi.co.yu/english/78.php ''Islam and Slavery: The Concealed Truth''], Srdja Trifkovic, Xavier University of Louisiana, New Orleans, November 14, 2003.
 
[http://www.pogledi.co.yu/english/78.php ''Islam and Slavery: The Concealed Truth''], Srdja Trifkovic, Xavier University of Louisiana, New Orleans, November 14, 2003.
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== Preliminary corrections ==
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I might make a thorough and detailed list if I have time, but upon glancing through the part on Africa so far I have picked up on two aspects that stood out to me, both rather minor:
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*The explorer's name is David Livingstone not Livingston as it is listed on at least one occasion.
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*The suggestion that the Nile is unusual in flowing north is rather ambiguous. This idea that it is unusual is simply due to human perception, in that modern maps have north at the top and so it seems counter-intuitive that 'up river' would be 'down south'.
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[[User:RobertWDP|RobertWDP]] 09:42, 27 February 2009 (EST)
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