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:: May I ask what the serious consideration entails? Is the final decision that the article stays as it is? [[User:ATang|ATang]] 10:44, 7 August 2007 (EDT)
 
:: May I ask what the serious consideration entails? Is the final decision that the article stays as it is? [[User:ATang|ATang]] 10:44, 7 August 2007 (EDT)
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== Intro edit ==
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I edited the intro to reflect our (or at least my) quest for accuracy.
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The "Clinton was a pretty good president for a Republican" quote appears to be a myth, joke, or maybe it's simply inaccurate: Googling for the phrase (with quotation marks) gives FOUR sites: Brainyquote, Conservapedia, The Huffington Post (but merely because a reader's comment there used it) and a blog entry that showcases this article and CP (in a not quite positive light). So I removed it.
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The second quote was fairly easy to source properly (and I'm puzzled why it hasn't been done so before). I expanded it to properly reflect his full reply - it shows better how he thinks of the US as a whole.
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I also rephrased the lead-in since it sounded too much like a cheap shot and less like actual information. Also, the claim that his views can be best summed up with 1-2 carefully selected and cropped quotes (especially with one of the quotes being apparently fabricated) sounds dubious in itself. --[[User:MilesM|MilesM]] 12:41, 15 April 2008 (EDT)
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