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==New Proposed article contents==
 
==New Proposed article contents==
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'''Sexual intercourse''' is the mechanism by which [[human beings]] [[reproduce]] and produce [[offspring]].  During sexual intercourse, the male's [[sperm]] [[fertilises]] the female's [[egg]], the mother becomes [[pregnancy|pregnant]], and the [[child]] forms in the [[womb]].
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'''Sexual intercourse''' is the physical mechanism by which [[human beings]] [[reproduce]] and produce [[offspring]].  During sexual intercourse, the male's [[sperm]] can [[fertilise]] the female's [[egg]], shortly thereafter the mother becomes [[pregnancy|pregnant]], and the [[child]] forms in the [[womb]].
    
I suggest the above for the content of this article.  I have removed the references to the body parts, in the interest of getting ''anything'' better than what is currently in this article.  The article is locked, so perhaps we can discuss this with the intent of putting this os something similar in here?  [[User:EngelUmpocker|EngelUmpocker]] 17:28, 23 May 2008 (EDT)
 
I suggest the above for the content of this article.  I have removed the references to the body parts, in the interest of getting ''anything'' better than what is currently in this article.  The article is locked, so perhaps we can discuss this with the intent of putting this os something similar in here?  [[User:EngelUmpocker|EngelUmpocker]] 17:28, 23 May 2008 (EDT)
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