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"An Affirmative Action President is strongly supported by some liberals who favor affirmative action. As they support affirmative action for other positions, it is a logical extension for them to favor it for the presidency also. "  While is may be true, as presented here it just sounds like complete hearsay.  While there may be individuals who indeed feel this way but there is no centralized liberal authority or association that has officially expressed these views.  It is irresponsible and disgraceful to imply that thi is the main reason for the endorsement of Senator Obama by people who cal themselves liberals.
 
"An Affirmative Action President is strongly supported by some liberals who favor affirmative action. As they support affirmative action for other positions, it is a logical extension for them to favor it for the presidency also. "  While is may be true, as presented here it just sounds like complete hearsay.  While there may be individuals who indeed feel this way but there is no centralized liberal authority or association that has officially expressed these views.  It is irresponsible and disgraceful to imply that thi is the main reason for the endorsement of Senator Obama by people who cal themselves liberals.
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== A note on the sources ==
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There are three sources given as they contain Affirmative Action President in the headline.  However the first two seem to be positively disavowing (perhaps even criticising the suggestion) that they think Obama would be an affirmative action president.  The third source can be used as a reference to support the proposition in the article.  Therefore I suggest that we remove the first two sources as they only superficially appear to support the proposition - not the ideal we are seeking here. 
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By the way I have no problem as far as the article stands except for this point. [[user:DamianJohn|DamianJohn]]
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