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:I apologize since my wikifying is a new skill I"m trying to develop.  I've fixed the wording and provided a better example of the first point - the creation of the nylon-digesting enzyme complex.  I also clarified the quote by Grasse.  Hope those help!
 
:I apologize since my wikifying is a new skill I"m trying to develop.  I've fixed the wording and provided a better example of the first point - the creation of the nylon-digesting enzyme complex.  I also clarified the quote by Grasse.  Hope those help!
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:: You've now provided a different first reference, but haven't addressed the comments I made about the other references.
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:: Also, your revised comment about quotes is slightly better, but still not good enough, and implicitly falsely treats creationists and scientists as two mutually-exclusive groups.  Your comment near the end about some claims being opinion is factually incorrect.
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:: I'll do some work on it.
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:: [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 08:21, 31 October 2008 (EDT)
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