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Ignoring some of the other potential issues with this article, regarding the introduction ("Population control is the liberal socialist myth.."), is it really a "socialist" myth?  I mean, I don't see anything in the article that suggests it's socialist in nature.  Liberal, I'm okay with, but the two terms aren't interchangeable (even if they were, it would be redundant). [[User:Commodore Guff|KevinS]] 11:37, 8 January 2009 (EST)
 
Ignoring some of the other potential issues with this article, regarding the introduction ("Population control is the liberal socialist myth.."), is it really a "socialist" myth?  I mean, I don't see anything in the article that suggests it's socialist in nature.  Liberal, I'm okay with, but the two terms aren't interchangeable (even if they were, it would be redundant). [[User:Commodore Guff|KevinS]] 11:37, 8 January 2009 (EST)
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== First paragraph revision ==
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I changed the opening of the article to clarify that "population control" is not the myth - it's the concern about overpopulation that is.  Population control is the reaction to the myth, not the myth itself.  For the record, I don't consider the whole "liberal socialist myth" part to be true, but my fix is meant to be grammatical/contextual, not ideological. --[[User:DinsdaleP|DinsdaleP]] 10:44, 9 January 2009 (EST)
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