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Going to have to ask you to do your edit again to Herod. It's good, but the reason for it is your use of the word "however"; using it four times in a single paragraph means you flipped over your own argument three times. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] ([[User talk:Karajou|talk]]) 11:21, 29 March 2017 (EDT)
Going to have to ask you to do your edit again to Herod. It's good, but the reason for it is your use of the word "however"; using it four times in a single paragraph means you flipped over your own argument three times. [[User:Karajou|Karajou]] ([[User talk:Karajou|talk]]) 11:21, 29 March 2017 (EDT)
:Good point. Did that.