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Citizens should be permitted to bear arms because they offer securities, the populace should not be subjected to the liberal standpoint on the gun control issue, and firearms can be used recreationally.  Guns protect us not only from the common criminal, but from the creation of a tyrannical government.  Armaments are viewed negatively and citizens should not be subjected to these faulty arguments.  Finally, weapons are employed in several legal recreational activities.  Therefore, we should defend our right to bear arms for the protection of ourselves and our basic liberties in this country.^{'''citation needed'''}

Citizens should be permitted to bear arms because they offer securities, the populace should not be subjected to the liberal standpoint on the gun control issue, and firearms can be used recreationally.  Guns protect us not only from the common criminal, but from the creation of a tyrannical government.  Armaments are viewed negatively and citizens should not be subjected to these faulty arguments.  Finally, weapons are employed in several legal recreational activities.  Therefore, we should defend our right to bear arms for the protection of ourselves and our basic liberties in this country.