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''Neither do the statistics include senior citizens, homeless, military personnel, or battered pregnant women by boyfriends and husbands after becoming pregnent -- all known victim classes of hate crime attacks.'' I haven't waded through the whole talk page here, but I did notice on skimming the article that this sentence needs some work - I think I ''may'' understand what it is trying to say, but it is very unclear and the last part (''battered pregnant women by boyfriends and husbands after becoming pregnent'') definately needs to be cleaned up gramatically and spelling-wise. I'd do it myself but am reluctant to touch it since I'm not sure I understand what it's meant to say.--[[User:Hsmom|Hsmom]] 17:54, 9 May 2007 (EDT)
''Neither do the statistics include senior citizens, homeless, military personnel, or battered pregnant women by boyfriends and husbands after becoming pregnent -- all known victim classes of hate crime attacks.'' I haven't waded through the whole talk page here, but I did notice on skimming the article that this sentence needs some work - I think I ''may'' understand what it is trying to say, but it is very unclear and the last part (''battered pregnant women by boyfriends and husbands after becoming pregnent'') definately needs to be cleaned up gramatically and spelling-wise. I'd do it myself but am reluctant to touch it since I'm not sure I understand what it's meant to say.--[[User:Hsmom|Hsmom]] 17:54, 9 May 2007 (EDT)
:Pregnant women often are violently abused by husbands and boyfriends after becoming pregnant. This is a hate-motived crime. [[User:RobS|RobS]] 18:17, 9 May 2007 (EDT)
:Pregnant women often are violently abused by husbands and boyfriends after becoming pregnant. This is a hate-motived crime. [[User:RobS|RobS]] 18:17, 9 May 2007 (EDT)
::<shakes head back and forth to make sure he just heard that reply> What? how is this... wha? I am so confused by your reply to this I don't know what to say. <composes self> How is beating a pregnant woman a hate crime? <exits, pursued by a bear> [[User:Flippin|Flippin]] 18:19, 9 May 2007 (EDT)