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*I see, too, that the entry sez Pelosi marched "along with" Harry Hay.  The cites show the parade lineup:  Hay, then The SF LGBT Community Center Project, Team San Francisco (whatever that is), the San Francisco Fog Rugby Football Club (I'm bettin' that's some wild scrum!), "Healing Waters", and ''then'' Pelosi.  Intentional or not, the sentence above makes it sounds like she was at Hay's side, hand in hand, when in reality it would seem that they wouldn't even have been able to see each other.  --[[User:WJThomas|WJThomas]] 20:14, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
 
*I see, too, that the entry sez Pelosi marched "along with" Harry Hay.  The cites show the parade lineup:  Hay, then The SF LGBT Community Center Project, Team San Francisco (whatever that is), the San Francisco Fog Rugby Football Club (I'm bettin' that's some wild scrum!), "Healing Waters", and ''then'' Pelosi.  Intentional or not, the sentence above makes it sounds like she was at Hay's side, hand in hand, when in reality it would seem that they wouldn't even have been able to see each other.  --[[User:WJThomas|WJThomas]] 20:14, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
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This all sounds like character assassination.
    
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