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::Point taken. Uh, I haven't added anything useful to the article, but '''I''' didn't have anything to do with any debunking quotations, either... the edit I made a few minutes ago is the last edit I'll make to this particular sentence. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] 13:18, 29 May 2007 (EDT)
 
::Point taken. Uh, I haven't added anything useful to the article, but '''I''' didn't have anything to do with any debunking quotations, either... the edit I made a few minutes ago is the last edit I'll make to this particular sentence. [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith]] 13:18, 29 May 2007 (EDT)
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sorrrrry, should have read this before I waded in, ooops. Will probably get reverted. Remider to self. <Always Read the talk page>.--[[User:Felix|Felix]] 13:14, 29 May 2007 (EDT)
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sorrrrry, should have read this before I waded in, ooops. Will probably get reverted. Reminder to self. <Always Read the talk page>.--[[User:Felix|Felix]] 13:14, 29 May 2007 (EDT)
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"The exhibits illustrate that the planet is just a few thousand years old" means that the exhibits prove it.
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"The exhibits are designed to show that the planet is just a few thousand years old" means that there is a purpose behind the exhibit.
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"The purpose of the exhibits is to convince us that the planet is just a few thousand years old" clarifies the purpose and does not comment on whether they work.
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"The exhibits are an attempt to convince visitors to the museum that the planet is just a few thousand years old" is much more near the truth, as many may not be convinced.
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--[[User:Felix|Felix]] 13:24, 29 May 2007 (EDT)
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