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* Also, the citations are to the events/facts rather than to their cluelessness.  
 
* Also, the citations are to the events/facts rather than to their cluelessness.  
 
* Are there any cites to their cluelessness?
 
* Are there any cites to their cluelessness?
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* Finally there and a couple of other places, it would be better imho to use non-blaming words. Even though obviously we will show our view of things, we want others to follow along, concluding on their own the blame, right ?
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* Finally there and a couple of other places, it would be better imho to use non-blaming words. Even though obviously we will show our view of things, we want others to follow along, concluding on their own the blame, right ? {{unsigned|}}
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:Good points. Have at it. Be Bold, as they say. [[User:RobSmith|RobS]]<sup>[[User talk:RobSmith|''Give Peace a Chance!'']]</sup> 14:20, September 7, 2023 (EDT)
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