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'''1.''' Very recently, I began to significantly deepen my friendship with a very accomplished individual in his profession who is a member of internationally recognized prestigious organizations due to his volunteer work. In addition, this person was nominated for a prestigious civic award and was awarded this prestigious civic award.  

'''1.''' Very recently, I began to significantly deepen my friendship with a very accomplished individual in his profession who is a member of internationally recognized prestigious organizations due to his volunteer work. In addition, this person was nominated for a prestigious civic award and was awarded this prestigious civic award.  

The example of this fine person's life has been very inspiring and very recently I began to develop better habits and improved my attitude as well.  

The example of this fine person's life has been very inspiring in my life and very recently I began to develop better habits and improved my attitude as well.  

'''2.'''  Civic leader #2 and their influence on me

'''2.'''  Civic leader #2 and their influence on me