3. I have looked at creationists Ray Martinez's work in the past and I know that he can produce good work. However, I looked at Ray Martinez's version briefly and immediately ran across unencyclopedic language. For example, I found this unencyclopedic: A critical view of Darwinists '''in sheeps clothing''' I also think you should have used footnotes instead of a bibliography since the evo/creo issue can be contentious. | 3. I have looked at creationists Ray Martinez's work in the past and I know that he can produce good work. However, I looked at Ray Martinez's version briefly and immediately ran across unencyclopedic language. For example, I found this unencyclopedic: A critical view of Darwinists '''in sheeps clothing''' I also think you should have used footnotes instead of a bibliography since the evo/creo issue can be contentious. |