The demographic framing is fine, but the essay leans on a contested revisionist claim (that WWII enlistment was mainly material rather than ideological) without adequately supporting it, and several footnotes are just search-engine links rather than sources — which undercuts the essay's credibility more than anything else. Worth noting this is a "valid" question in the sourcing/rigor sense rather than an ideological one — the same critique would apply regardless of which political direction the essay leaned. | The demographic framing is fine, but the essay leans on a contested revisionist claim (that WWII enlistment was mainly material rather than ideological) without adequately supporting it, and several footnotes are just search-engine links rather than sources — which undercuts the essay's credibility more than anything else. Worth noting this is a "valid" question in the sourcing/rigor sense rather than an ideological one — the same critique would apply regardless of which political direction the essay leaned. |