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Please rewrite the intro
Rhetoric is verging on silly - or already there. This is a serious article about people in serious trouble:
:styles itself ...
:megalomaniacal dictator
:criticized by people of all political stripes ...
:difficulties with food shortages
First two are overblown rhetoric.
Next one is an exaggeration; liberals hardly ever criticize the NK government.
Last one is an understatement.
Please rewrite the intro with a more serious tone. Save ''breezy'' for record album reviews. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] <sup>[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]</sup> 23:01, 6 July 2007 (EDT)
:styles itself ...
:megalomaniacal dictator
:criticized by people of all political stripes ...
:difficulties with food shortages
First two are overblown rhetoric.
Next one is an exaggeration; liberals hardly ever criticize the NK government.
Last one is an understatement.
Please rewrite the intro with a more serious tone. Save ''breezy'' for record album reviews. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] <sup>[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]</sup> 23:01, 6 July 2007 (EDT)