Changes

One exciting aspect of the pantoum is the subtle shifts of context as repeated phrases are revised with different punctuation.In John Ashbury's poem, "Pantoum", the line "Why the court, trapped in a silver storm, is dying." becomes, "Why, the court, trapped in a silver storm, is dying!" when repeated, reflecting the shift in emotion that can occur from a simple change of punctuation.

One exciting aspect of the pantoum is the subtle shifts of context as repeated phrases are revised with different punctuation.In John Ashbury's poem, "Pantoum", the line "Why the court, trapped in a silver storm, is dying." becomes, "Why, the court, trapped in a silver storm, is dying!" when repeated, reflecting the shift in emotion that can occur from a simple change of punctuation.