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==Maintain the neutrality of the article==
 
==Maintain the neutrality of the article==
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Reading through this article, nearly 1/3 of all the sentences cite a 'fact' yet have no reference. And because it is edit-locked, a mod with a true notion of what it is to create informative articles needs to go over this with a fine tooth comb.--[[User:Nosferatu.feuertote|Nosferatu.feuertote]] 21:18, 16 March 2007 (EDT)
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George W. Bush had an abortion
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God created man and man made abortion so abortion is good
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I cannot help but notice that of the TWO citations noted after the claim that abortion is a "billion dollar industry", neither of the linked "references" make any claims about the value of the "abortion industry". I am NOT pro-abortion, however I am PRO-FACT. If you make a claim and list citations directly afterwards, THOSE CITATIONS SHOULD DIRECTLY VERIFY THE CLAIM YOU HAVE JUST MADE! A quote from the first "source":
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Republicans say this law is being violated in the interest of making money, although they did not provide specific numbers or incidents.
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The second "source makes absolutely no mention of any revenues, potential or actual.
      
Brian
 
Brian