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== References ==
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I apologize for the poor referencing last time. I hope these references prove to be more acceptable. However, I thought it might be wise to check first:
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Reference for "citation needed" #1 ("increasingly popular alternative"): http://nces.ed.gov/nhes/homeschool/
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Reference for "citation needed" #3 ("parents choose homeschooling due to..."): http://www.hsnp.com/gok/faq.html
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Add the references to the article if you feel they're justified, or just say so and I'll add them myself. [[User:Feebasfactor|Feebasfactor]] 19:57, 14 September 2007 (EDT)
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== My rewrite ==
 
== My rewrite ==
 
With no disrespect to the good edits of the previous editors, I felt that the changes were still not adequately describing the situation and that it couldn't be adequately described without a rearrangement.  I hope people (still) like it now.  Being not very familiar with the situations in other places, I've made some assumptions in the rewrite, so please jump in and correct what I've done.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 20:18, 17 June 2007 (EDT)
 
With no disrespect to the good edits of the previous editors, I felt that the changes were still not adequately describing the situation and that it couldn't be adequately described without a rearrangement.  I hope people (still) like it now.  Being not very familiar with the situations in other places, I've made some assumptions in the rewrite, so please jump in and correct what I've done.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 20:18, 17 June 2007 (EDT)
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