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The link to sex leads to a discussion of gender - not really germane to the article at hand. [[User:AliceBG|AliceBG]] 17:43, 1 March 2008 (EST)
 
The link to sex leads to a discussion of gender - not really germane to the article at hand. [[User:AliceBG|AliceBG]] 17:43, 1 March 2008 (EST)
 
:I've changed it, although I'm not particularly happy with the wording.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 22:43, 1 March 2008 (EST)
 
:I've changed it, although I'm not particularly happy with the wording.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 22:43, 1 March 2008 (EST)
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:: After drafting my edit I did very briefly (too briefly?) consider referring to pornography, but wondered if it was too limiting.  Nevertheless, I agree that your wording is better.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 23:07, 1 March 2008 (EST)
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