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Talk:Dungeons and Dragons (view source)
Revision as of 00:27, March 14, 2008
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==And the beat goes on ... ==
==And the beat goes on ... ==
I just finished "Unchristian Activities". An editorial review to sift out my opinions might be helpful. [[User:Everwill|Everwill]]
I just finished "Unchristian Activities". An editorial review to sift out my opinions might be helpful. [[User:Everwill|Everwill]]
:On the whole, I like it - it seems nicely balanced, giving both sides of the debate. I do have concerns about the 'warning to parents and players', though. It is still balanced, as it seems to give two different sides to that issue, but it seems to be describing differing opinions, rather than relying on verifiable facts, and it also leaves out both the idea that both opinions may be wrong (D&D could, in effect, be 'just a game' to many players, having neither a positive or negative effect), and the idea that playing as an 'evil' character has precisely the opposite effect than the article suggests (it 'gets it out of your system', so to speak, so you don't act in such a manner outside of the game, in real life). The part about guns also has me doubly concerned, as it seemingly drags a whole different issue into the article, which I'm not sure is appropriate, and it also seems to try to simplify each side of the gun control issue into a few words, at the cost of leaving out important details (for example, some anti-gun folk call guns 'evil' because, whilst are tools, they're tools designed for a single function - to kill). Other than that, nice work, not just on that section, but the whole page. [[User:Urushnor|Urushnor]] 20:27, 13 March 2008 (EDT)