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::: The ideas that are presented in this article '''are NOT''' original ideas from the sources we are dealing. They are as old as Plato and Hippocrates, ancient Chines and Indian medicine, and a big '''ETC'''.  So we are not taking ideas, just words that could be presented in a better way when we try to act in a ''constructive'' manner. Now, proceed as you please. --[[User:Joaquín Martínez]], [[User talk:Joaquín Martínez|talk]] 11:14, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

::: The ideas that are presented in this article '''are NOT''' original ideas from the sources we are dealing. They are as old as Plato and Hippocrates, ancient Chines and Indian medicine, and a big '''ETC'''.  So we are not taking ideas, just words that could be presented in a better way when we try to act in a ''constructive'' manner. Now, proceed as you please. --[[User:Joaquín Martínez]], [[User talk:Joaquín Martínez|talk]] 11:14, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

:::: It's the taking of ''words'' without making clear that you are ''quoting'' that is the problem.  Whether they ideas are original to those sources or not is beside the point:  The links give the impression that that's the case.  I'm assuming that you are asking me to edit the article.  I will, but only by turning the content into the quotes that they actually are.  You then have two choices:  A) Replace the quotes with material written in ''your own words'', or B) add introductory material to each quote so that the article does not consist almost entirely of quotes.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 11:28, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

:::: It's the taking of ''words'' without making clear that you are ''quoting'' that is the problem.  Whether the ideas are original to those sources or not is beside the point:  The links give the impression that that's the case.  I'm assuming that you are asking me to edit the article.  I will, but only by turning the content into the quotes that they actually are.  You then have two choices:  A) Replace the quotes with material written in ''your own words'', or B) add introductory material to each quote so that the article does not consist almost entirely of quotes.  [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 11:28, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

:: The article as it is now just needs some little changes, not to be destroyed! --[[User:Joaquín Martínez]], [[User talk:Joaquín Martínez|talk]] 11:55, 8 April 2008 (EDT)

:: The article as it is now just needs some little changes, not to be destroyed! --[[User:Joaquín Martínez]], [[User talk:Joaquín Martínez|talk]] 11:55, 8 April 2008 (EDT)