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Tim, I agree with putting it further down the page.  Right now the lead looks bad with all these criticisms.  I agree that it belongs in the article but I think we should make a seperate section for all of this or include it in the relevant sections already there.  We had the same thing on the McCain page.  A lead section full of little criticisms of mistakes in speeches until I removed it.  What do you think? [[User:HenryS|HenryS]] 16:12, 13 June 2008 (EDT)
 
Tim, I agree with putting it further down the page.  Right now the lead looks bad with all these criticisms.  I agree that it belongs in the article but I think we should make a seperate section for all of this or include it in the relevant sections already there.  We had the same thing on the McCain page.  A lead section full of little criticisms of mistakes in speeches until I removed it.  What do you think? [[User:HenryS|HenryS]] 16:12, 13 June 2008 (EDT)
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::I agree.  I think the lead should only include major biographical information.  Everything else belongs further down. --[[User:CPAdmin1|Tim]] <small>(CPAdmin1)</small><sup>[[User talk:CPAdmin1|talk]]</sup>  <sup>[[User:CPAdmin1/Polls|Vote in my NEW polls]]</sup> 16:16, 13 June 2008 (EDT)
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